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A Woman's Progress

She could have been a girl that was rejected and neglected, and how it made her feel killed her will to forgive so she becomes this reflection of, bitter pain instead of the reflection of mental, spiritual, and emotional change and as we all try to stay sane in a insane world, she just becomes another misunderstood girl, that later could become the woman that every man admire and every little girl aspire to be, but at the same time she’s coping with other things that she don’t want nobody to see, which causes her to ask herself ,why they want to be me ? , And after all that she became the wise lady that put’s it all in perspective to the point it all make sense and she no longer hides her soul behind this self-destructive fence, and now she’s strong enough to take on every life lesson because she’s learned after the pain usually comes the blessing. Keith Quimbley 11/14/13

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Date: 11/15/2013 12:27:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Keith! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/15/2013 12:15:00 PM
Keith, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/15/2013 11:54:00 AM
your poem is a blessing, with truth Keith, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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