A Woman's Love

A bullet to the chest/ ain't nearly as hard
As a woman who deals with a broken heart
You see they both leave scars/ but only one can be seen
The other stays hidden behind lost hope and dreams

So before you go hurting a woman/ remember the golden rule
Never go treating her like she's some kind of fool
Show her love and respect/ throw your pride out the door
She'll always be the one that you're yearning for

But if you ever have to hurt a woman/ You'll most likely leave a scar
And one would think that they wouldn't get very far
But while a womans heart may hurt/ enough to make a man give up
That woman will be the strongest around, all thanks to her love.

Dedicated to all the women that put up with us bone-headed men:)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/29/2011 9:35:00 AM
Loved this one Matt, very great piece you wrote. thank you for commenting on Breezes on the Lake
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Date: 5/22/2011 8:04:00 PM
This is really sweet for all the broken hearted women out there. My own heart breaks were always a bit superficial. I know some men who can't seem to get over a woman. Sometimes I think they get their hearts broken worse than those of us "the stronger sex" heehee. LUv ,Andrea
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Date: 5/22/2011 11:46:00 PM
That would be me....lol Of course I don't let my manly side ever show it:D
Date: 5/22/2011 1:57:00 PM
true, because i lived it, super nice poem, thanks rm....
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Matt Hunt
Date: 5/22/2011 5:32:00 PM
Thanks brother:)
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