A Woman Stood On the Rocks Part Ii

A woman stood on the rocks, looking out into the sea. A beautiful sight to see. from the top of the rocks, she could see farther into the sea. Ten years had passed, since her love went away. He never came back. She was not too young anymore, but not too old either. She never got married, she had promised herself that she would wait for her man. The day was beautiful, the sky was so blue, in her mind she was thinking, how nice it would be, if I could reunite my darling with you. very far away, she saw a ship coming. She waited until it docked in the port, than she ran as fast as she could. There was a lot of commotion when she got there.They told her that some men had been rescued from an Island. Her heart started to palpitate as she saw them come out. She then saw the man she had loved - was one of them. He did not looked the same anymore, but then neither did she. She looked at him, he looked at her, as they ran towards eachother. The love they felt was seen by everyone. It had not changed. They hugged eachother. He than asked her - I hope you still want to marry me? She said yes. A big wedding followed, with family and friends. It was held by the rocks, close to the sea. Thei story would be told for years to come - how their love survived storms and all...
Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo Hope you like this story/poem

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 11/11/2012 11:00:00 AM
ahhh, it had a GOOD ending. Wonderful, Lucilla.!!
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Date: 9/3/2012 11:08:00 PM
I am eagerly looking for a woman that I can love for the rest of my life Lucilla and this poem sustains my faith that the opportunity to do so may come true for me - thank you so much - J.A.B. %
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Date: 9/3/2012 2:57:00 PM
A wonderful tale of everlasting love... the way things should alwaysw be... love it... Terry
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Date: 6/14/2012 8:10:00 PM
a beautiful short story straight from the heart eating at my soul and tearing it apart.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 6/15/2012 9:46:00 AM
Oh WOW! thank you for the nice comment. Lucilla
Date: 6/7/2012 12:48:00 PM
great ending Lucille,love that survives storm and sea
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Date: 6/6/2012 11:44:00 AM
It was good that all the waithing ended so happy. - I love happy ending Lucilla - thank you for this lovely story/poem - like it a lot. - Have a nice week, take care. - oxox love from Anne-Lise
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 6/6/2012 12:18:00 PM
Thank you Anne; glad that you enjoyed it. I will visit with you later. I am having problems with my computer. many blessings. Lucilla
Date: 6/6/2012 9:51:00 AM
This is so beautiful! I honestly wondered how you were going to complete part II but you did it well <3
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 6/6/2012 10:06:00 AM
Brittany; Thanks for reading. This has a story behind it. In another site, one day we had a challange. We were write something with just the title. This is what I came up with. Many blessings. Lucilla
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