A Woman Stood On the Rocks

A woman stood on the rocks, looking out into the sea. In her mind she was thinking, how nice it would be, if my love that left one day, would come back to me. A woman stood on the rocks, she was feeling sad. The one she loved had left her and sailed out to sea. Before he left - he told her - when I come back my love, I want you to marry me. A woman stood on the rocks, wondering, what went wrong? Is my love lost at sea? Did he vanished into thin air, or did he just forget about me? Yes, A woman stood on the rocks, looking out into the sea, asking herself this question - why did it have to happen to me...
Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo To be continued
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 10:59 AM
I really like this one. HAd to search a bit to find one I had not commented to. let me see part two.
White Avatar
October 26, 2012 at 1:57 PM
Beautiful poem.
Bordner Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 11:12 PM
Your poem evokes thoughts of all the women and men in our history whom have had to endure this predicament Lucilla - once upon a time this scenario was commonplace all around the world - I respec these tests of love - J.A.B. %
Grisetti Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 1:57 PM
A beautiful poem about a lost love. So many women sit and wait for that man to return. Thanks for sharing.
Andresen Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 11:39 AM
Touching.......... - Hope for a happy ending...- oxox Anne-Lise
Carrillo Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 12:15 PM
Thanks Anne; I think you'll like it. many blessings. Lucilla
Palmer Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 9:17 AM
sorry woman standing on rocks,great write Lucilla
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