Lucilla Carrillo Poet Free verse

A Woman

God created a woman to be a compaion for man.
He didn't create her to be mistreated, neither did
He create her to be his slave. He didn't want her to 
be over him. He just wanted her to be with him.

He didn't want her to do all the work, but to help 
him, if he needed help. He didn't want her to be
ahead of him, or behind him, but to walk always
by his side.

God made the woman very carefully. He also
made her very strong, so she could give support
to her man, when he thought, that his would
fall. He made a perfect creation.

He took His time in making her He wanted her to
have all the things that a man would need to make 
his life complete. A woman can cry a river, but she
can also hold back her tears.

A woman has feelings. A woman has a heart. she also
has a soul. But don't forget - she also has brains.
A woman in Gods" eyes, is a precious gem. That is
why He gave her as a gift to man.  A woman...

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Verlena S. Walker March 9, 2014 at 11:15 AM Thanks for that Lucilla... I am empowered... You and I seem to be part of the same... I enjoyed my visit here... Thanks, once again... :)s and hugs Verlena

Poet Destroyer A February 15, 2013 at 5:16 PM Hello Lucy, hope you are well... stopping by to say HI!:-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Always~ PD"

Daver Austin February 11, 2013 at 12:05 PM Yep. Barefoot in the kitchen, with a house full of kids is not for the women of today. They are too well educated. Congrats on the selection. daver

Debra Falgout February 10, 2013 at 8:02 PM I love the words written in your poem, we need more strong women in this world we live in, helping out one another in times of strength and weaknesses, have a blessed day, peace debra

Andrea Dietrich February 2, 2013 at 12:40 PM wonderful oldie poem of yours that I had not yet seen!! I really admire you that you don't mind the aging process, but I really hate it, dear. Since I turned 55, it's been nothing but problems. I have a healthy life style, I just don't understand it!!!

Barbara Dumbovic November 27, 2012 at 8:43 PM What a beautiful poem and so true thanks you for writing it God Bless

Louis Rams May 26, 2012 at 4:38 PM god made a woman to be the mans mate , and when he did this he did not hesitate. from the ribs of man he took just one bone so that this man can never be alone. she is not the rib, but the backbone of man, for what other creature would be able to understand. he made a woman to be a companion, a friend ,a daughter , a mother , a wife, because we needed something to complete our mortal life. ALWAYS WALK PROUD Lucilla Carrillo May 26, 2012 at 10:46 PM Louis; thanks for commenting on my poem. U.R. one hack of a writer. Take care and God bless. Lucilla

Kevin Clark February 3, 2012 at 5:17 AM Oh what a woman you must be To see this point and write it truthfully To quill it easily as you can To make us think and make men a better man

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 31, 2012 at 2:29 PM truth and wisdom in these lines Lucilla.. thankxx for sharing inspiring words tonite luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown January 31, 2012 at 8:33 AM It is exciting to see the replenishment of new poetry here everyday when I log on. I enjoy the diverse poetry so I am never bored by most of what I read. I am happy to have read your poetry this morning Lucilla. I hope that you might be able to find the time to read some of the other poetry here also. Love, Carol