A Woman

How could you explain?
Can something so very lovely bring one man so much pain?
Can something so simple seem to touch your inner soul?
Can a notion of her interest make certain things occur?...
I see it in her eyes, a fit of potent ferocity,
Who could ask me to deny a gift, your loveless generosity.
The fire in your heart, it burns like love’s eternal flame,
The passion of the night has turned excitement into shame.
At this moment it seems to me my pride may have been stolen,
By a beautiful beast,
The trick of treats,
An unforgiving,
Woman.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 20, 2010 at 2:07 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry today ... and its creative theme.. hope u will check out the contest scene offered to new members ..good luck with luv...
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October 20, 2010 at 10:18 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Joseph. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Lindsey Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 8:54 AM
Very nice write.
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October 20, 2010 at 5:19 AM
I like it, well played! so true too!! LOL
Mehta Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 5:16 AM
A nice pen picture you have painted by nice words about a woman
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October 19, 2010 at 8:10 PM
Joseph, a wonderful cool poem,thanks for calling us woman beast,, lol, there is no way you are just talking about one,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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