A Wish

I love being me, there isn't anything I will change
Except when I get a few years older
I'm sure my name won't be the same
I plan on getting married and being carried
By a man with good personality and a giving heart
I plan to love him like i have from the start
So, someday, I hope this dream comes true
There's nothing like committing my life to you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Garnes Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 3:40 PM
thank you for the comments. i hoping i'll meet the one someday
Coulstock Avatar
November 3, 2010 at 10:28 AM
Hi Samantha.I'm glad you have such self-confidence.Well needed this day and age.I thought this was a nice little poem.Hope your dreams come true that someone you have your eye on commits to you. Love June(Sylvia)
Mehta Avatar
November 3, 2010 at 9:37 AM
Very romantic futuristic thoughts of being carried on getting married and committing you life, Samantha
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