A Wish

Sent home from second grade, a star With glitter all around it Was lying on the table; I was Happy to have found it. My grandson had to write his wish And in his neatest hand, He came up with a wish I think We all could understand. “I wish the world could (simply) stop” (From) “wearing masks (real) soon.” (Words in parentheses are mine So rhythm stays in tune.) A poignant message for today To which we can relate, For children’s eyes are first to see The truth they’re quick to state.

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/30/2021 2:39:00 PM

I agree with your grandson, Ilene! Getting rid of masks will also mean that we have defeated this virus. Fingers crossed :) Regards // paul

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/27/2021 11:53:00 AM

This one really demonstrates your superior command of the language! Did you remind your grandson how fortunate he is to be a man, as Muslim women must hide behind a mask all of their adult life least they distract the angels from their chores?

Judy Ball

Date: 3/27/2021 8:41:00 AM

Amen my sister of the pen. Gives emphasis to the words, "And A Little Child Shall Lead Them." doesn't it. Good Stuff. God Bless, JB

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/27/2021 2:01:00 AM

Charming, Ilene ~

J. Summers

Date: 3/26/2021 8:55:00 PM

It is a pleasure reading your work. You write with such good flow and rhythm. I share your grandson’s feelings. John

Jan Allison

Date: 3/26/2021 5:44:00 PM

his wish is echoed by us all Ilene, and i am hoping we will soon be covid free here once again, but until that day we have to mask up:-( hugs jan xx

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/26/2021 5:41:00 PM

I am also looking to see the day when wearing masks will no longer be a necessity. Good write as usual.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/26/2021 2:39:00 PM

I hope his wish comes true Ilene. But they reckon we'll have to wear them for the foreseeable future. Tom

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/26/2021 1:45:00 PM

Yes, indeed, Ilene. Sharp youngster with a sweet heart! I enjoyed this poem immensely. I would recommend it be read by everyone.