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A wish

The little she knew the story was flipped; The oceans, the clouds, the skies, the sun, the moon, the air, The wind and the stars were nothing but details in her generous face. I’ve wished for myself to be the fish in her oceans, I’ve wished for myself to be the rain in her clouds, I've wished for myself to be the birds in her skies, I've wished for myself to be the rays of her sun, I've wished for myself to be the light of her moon, I've wished for myself to be the breeze in her air, I've wished for myself to be the spring in her wind, I've wished for myself to be the spark in her stars.

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Date: 5/9/2020 10:58:00 AM
Line 3 is very deep, and explains the poem. So it's a hinge between the real person, and what the lover wishes as HER MAJESTY & FACE! I like this style. Anil S. Deo, shalom/peace. Read one of mine ?
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