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A WISH -- In Memory Of "I Wish" I wish I could blow air into your little lungs, The day my daughter brought your stillborn body into this world. Hold your little body warm, And tell my little girl you have her cute little nose.... Count your little fingers, and kiss your little toes.... I wish, I could look into your daring eyes, Facing a little boy, who's ready for this world I wish, I could tell my daughter you have her beautiful brown eyes... Sadly, it’s not like that. How can I tell my daughter everything will be all right? When a piece of my heart was stolen with her's, When giving birth to her son, my grandson March 25, 2013---- How it Hurts! ~~~ O’ how I wish, you entered this world crying Instead, we're the ones left in tears of sorrow ~~~ How I wish you could be, And not this feeling you left inside How I wish, God could explain why o' why o' why? Mostly, I WISH grandma could fix this and make your mommy feel, the joy she was robbed of. In memory of my grandson: ---Bael Lesley G. Born March 25, 2013 --- RIP March 25, 2013 ---------- by;PD :-(

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Date: 6/24/2016 5:18:00 AM
what an emotional narration it is....while reading it the entire scene flashed in front of me.....feeling sorry for whatever happened......may god bless his soul...'Agni'Kosh
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Date: 9/16/2015 8:30:00 PM
Dear Linda I'm relearning so much about my dearest sister, this must have been devastating to you, I'm so sorry for the loss of this baby boy, I'm at a loss for words I wish that you were not so far away for after reading this beautiful poem of your so full of love and devotion, sadness and pain I really would love to hug you sis, cheri
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Date: 8/29/2014 3:29:00 AM
People make the effort to create life (especially the women) everybody wants to see a newborn child and all those life firsts. You have to assume a selfish God couldn't wait to see that from your grandson too. he is Sinless and safe now I'm sure.
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Date: 5/23/2014 9:07:00 AM
Hi Linda, This touched my heart. So deeply. I'm so sorry this happened to you and your family. You are in my prayers and in my thoughts. May kindness and tenderness be your ray of sun everyday. Hugs my friend. Love and Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/4/2014 7:27:00 PM
This is so gut wrenching Linda, wish i could just bear-hug your daughter and you, may God eaze the pain your family feels, blessings, luv, and hugs, Carl
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Date: 4/27/2014 6:57:00 PM
I'm so sorry... Beautiful and touching. Best of wishes :)
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Date: 4/13/2014 10:55:00 AM
Heart breaking. I ask myself, why have I lived 84 years while another is denied. LOve, Dave
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Date: 4/13/2014 4:37:00 AM
am touched...my heart feels u
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Date: 4/12/2014 11:53:00 AM
A touching and moving expression of deep grief, Linda. :( My heart goes out to you and yours....Sam
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Date: 4/9/2014 10:15:00 PM
A heart touching poem pd .i am greatly inspired by you.:)
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Date: 4/9/2014 9:28:00 AM
No words to say--- its a heart touching write. Feeling sorry for the loss . may god bless all.
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Date: 4/8/2014 8:13:00 AM
May God's grace help you endure and let you know that you're secure. Jesus said we will have trouble. Bael Lesley G. is in his hands. And so are you. Peace and Prayers. :)
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Date: 4/5/2014 4:56:00 PM
very heart felt touch me inside... smiles and hugs... Gina
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Date: 4/5/2014 12:50:00 PM
Oh Linda, how my heart can't even sense your deep, deep pain. Please know that You are your Daughter are in my thoughts and my prayers. I am truly sorry Linda. God Bless You Bael.
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Date: 4/4/2014 7:02:00 PM
This is a heart breaker dear Linda. I have not lost a new born but I have lost a granddaughter and a great grandson. It is hard to bear. You hurt for yourself and your child. Thank you for your dedication to reading and commenting. Love you, Joyce.
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Date: 4/2/2014 10:32:00 AM
Such a heartfelt expression of loss and grief! It is so sad... Thank you very much for greeting me and stopping by my poems, Cristina
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Date: 4/1/2014 9:11:00 PM
A sad and heartfelt tribute for your little angel....hugs
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Date: 4/1/2014 7:05:00 PM
Thank you my friend so much i appriecate you doing this for me dear. i'll be off and on tonight so i hope to catch you on the soup. cheri
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Date: 4/1/2014 12:38:00 PM
hey long time since i have spoken to you but what to do i had my exams and i landed 4th in class and i really admire all your poems and this one was actually heart wrenching lovely ..............luv crystal
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Date: 4/1/2014 12:13:00 AM
No words. I know. Always. Rick
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Date: 3/31/2014 11:01:00 PM
I can feel your heart crying PD . Please feel mine reaching out to give you a hug.
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Date: 3/31/2014 9:09:00 PM
Hey lady i wanted to let you know i got a bad strain to my left arm and pulled some legaments that's why i have not been on can you let skats and my mystic rose know it would mean alot to me i don't want you three to worry hey and if you bindu also pretty please my freind it's hard to type but i'm trying, i felt out side and fell down the front steps. but other than that i am still working so i'll try and be back on tomorrow. love cheri
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Date: 3/31/2014 7:09:00 PM
Sorry for your loss Linda, this poem really moved me. All the best. With love, Keith
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Date: 3/31/2014 9:34:00 AM
That was beautiful...
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Date: 3/29/2014 2:50:00 AM
I am sorry And I am Back :( The FEelings on this !OH MY THE FEELINGS!!
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