A Winter's Day On the Trail

wind-whipped waves, white-capping near shore
  trail's thin layer of ice, cracking underfoot
    a cold sock awaiting impatient shoes

on the look-out, hoping, but not really expecting
  to spot her on the trail she once danced along
    her lithe motions a Nutcracker Suite to me

no, no, no -- not him -- my old roommate approaching
  inviting me to join him on his 'Jog with Nature' kick
    what could I do... I fell glumly in line...
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Krutsinger Avatar
December 17, 2021 at 7:56 AM
This is hilarious! ".. I fell glumly in line... "
Ball Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 5:27 PM
Looking forward to glimpsing a lovely young wood nymph and instead Pan comes along and invites you to jog. Ah well you win some and then again you don't. Good one here Gershon. Love the imagery. God Bless, JB
Wolf Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 7:34 PM
Thank you, Judy. Peace on Earth, gw
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 4:27 PM
Great imagery! The Nutcracker in mind…but ye old roommate fancies a jog…lol
Wolf Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 7:33 PM
Brotherly Love isn't quite what I had in mind, eh?!
Awtry Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 12:00 PM
This is like a lovely dream interrupted by an annoying alarm clock! This was like a scene in a movie! I could feel the OH NO moment! I always enjoy your work!
Wolf Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 7:28 PM
Can't ask for a nicer comment than this, P.S. Much appreciated. :) Gershon
Hankins Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 9:36 AM
Another jaunt with an old friend...uh, well done, my friend. I enjoyed it.
Wolf Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 7:33 PM
What are friends for, I guess...
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