A Winter Walk

i simply mean that more beauty could still come out `a winter walk' if u just reviewed it.it`s up to u and more over it`s just an opinion.it `s a great work anyway.

u horde words......a sign of maturity.good job, but pls re-visit this poem again.There` s a petal that` s straining to push out thro the stem.k k iloduba jnr

This is superb my friend. I think this maybe my favorite of yours. I am digging the first line immensely, it sets the tone for the rest of the poem. Great job!

Beautiful winter poetry...I adore the phrase 'mystifying layers'. Love, Nigel

I loved this, felt just like a cold winter day! You give a wonderful, clear image from your words. :) I'm glad you liked my "broken branch" haiku, yes, I wanted to give it a little depth, a double meaning. :) Thanks so much for your kind comments, all the best. Love, Amy

I must agree with Kristin. Awesome write here. I am definitely a winter girl, but all we have here today is rain. Sounds like a lovely walk. Love, Shar

LOVE this chilling write! We are getting an ice/snow storm today, and goodness knows I'll have a poem before it'as done! lol so inspiring! love, Kristin