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A Winter Sun

Upon this yearly powdered dale,
where leafless birch in talon-ed stance
come begging in their circumstance,

the snowflakes fell in silent veil 
as thick as densely woven cloth
to gale a new year's behemoth.

While seeking warmth to no avail
I hunker in my hiemal sleigh
when through the rime in gleeful spray

a fulgid sun does spritely hail,
goes dancing between limb and twig
and waltzing 'round each wizened sprig

to glisten on my rutted swale.
Each pixel glitters on this path
in afterglow of winter's wrath.

Upon this yearly powdered dale
the snowflakes fell in silent veil.
While seeking warmth to no avail
a fulgid sun does spritely hail
to glisten on my frozen swale.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Bangalee Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 3:53 AM
excellently penned the Constanza//
Cozart Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 8:01 AM
Thanks for stopping by.
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 4:10 PM
You do justice to this lovely form. Beautiful constanza, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 4:20 PM
Thanks so much, Line.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 5:53 PM
Hello Dale, I can see the snow flakes fal as i read this poem. It covers all the ground,coating bare tree boughs with a white coat for warmth from the cold. Love It, Love it! have a nice evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 6:34 PM
Your welcome.
Cozart Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 6:01 PM
Thanks, Darlene!
Ashley Avatar
January 26, 2018 at 7:28 PM
Such beautiful poetic artistry on display in this winter wonderland of a write Dale. Your imagery and rhyme is simply stunning and superb. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Cozart Avatar
January 26, 2018 at 7:54 PM
Thank you, Susan.
Hamilton Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 8:49 AM
Well done Dale, I am enjoying this new form, I think I will try one, but haven't the nerve after seeing this lush write!
Cozart Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 8:57 AM
Go ahead! It's a fun form to write in. Connie invented a good one!
O.J. Hunt Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 3:06 PM
Just beautiful Dale, a fave:-)
Cozart Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 4:06 PM
Thanks, Keith! Nice to hear from you!!
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 5:17 PM
wow, your words are so luscious in this snowy poem!! I loved that fourth stanza. So descriptive!! I see Connie loves this too, and rightly so!
Cozart Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 6:10 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea!
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 3:17 PM
Dale....magnificent! My favorite stanza.... a fulgid sun does spritely hail, goes dancing between limb and twig, waltzing 'round each wizened sprig" You are such a talented poet. You often surpass the master poets of old! This is a stunning Constanza you have elevated to Brilliant! Have a super New Year my friend! : )
Cozart Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 3:42 PM
Aw, Connie, you are too kind. Happy New Year!!!!!!
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