Carol Mitra Poet Rhyme

A Winter Sun

The sun so mellow in the sky
A watery sun about to cry
It’s light now fading about to die
Winter is here painting white,'O my!’

Snowflakes falling like grains of rice
Filling our hearts overnight
Turning dewdrops into ice
Like pretty jewels looking so nice!

Nature simply makes things slow
A way of living we should know
Cold is the wind that blows
Love in hearts warm the flow! 

12.1.23

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Paula Goldsmith January 25, 2023 at 10:34 AM Congratulations on your win. A creative/fun write. I can see it. Love your line, "Snowflakes falling like grains of rice."  Have a great/blessed day..............

Linda Alice Fowler January 25, 2023 at 6:56 AM Congratulations this sweet write Carol! :)

Tania Kitchin January 24, 2023 at 6:43 PM Carol, a sweet poem, congratulations on your winning placement in the contest!

Regina Mcintosh January 12, 2023 at 1:46 AM Lovely. God bless you. Love, Gina Carol Mitra January 12, 2023 at 3:39 AM Hi Gina.... Thank you and love right back to you :)