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A Winter Sun

The sun so mellow in the sky A watery sun about to cry It’s light now fading about to die Winter is here painting white,'O my!’ Snowflakes falling like grains of rice Filling our hearts overnight Turning dewdrops into ice Like pretty jewels looking so nice! Nature simply makes things slow A way of living we should know Cold is the wind that blows Love in hearts warm the flow! 12.1.23

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Date: 1/25/2023 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative/fun write. I can see it. Love your line, "Snowflakes falling like grains of rice."  Have a great/blessed day..............
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Date: 1/25/2023 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations this sweet write Carol! :)
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Date: 1/24/2023 6:43:00 PM
Carol, a sweet poem, congratulations on your winning placement in the contest!
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Date: 1/12/2023 1:46:00 AM
Lovely. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Carol Mitra
Date: 1/12/2023 3:39:00 AM
Hi Gina.... Thank you and love right back to you :)

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