A Winter From the Past

Raindrops dripping over the trees
Into to the air it did seize 
Chiming clear, like musical notes
Hitting them hard at their throats                                                      
Winters come a calling at your door
With the thought of survival your first chore
Winds are blowing a slow lullabye 
With frightening notes way up high 
Covered in a still dewy dream 
A magical moment from a romantic scene
Streams of water move no longer 
With the coldest nights getting stronger
Frozen in place, frozen in time
From the tops of the mountains it no longer climbs
Blank are the days that lay upon this land 
Sad was their existence that ran out in strands 
Cold are the hands that plow it away
Tired are their eyes covered with gray 
And the days grow shorter
And the nights so meek
Sore are the soles of their feet 
Through the harshest wind and the coldest plight 
We lay close together through the darkest of night
I stand here with my nose pressed to the glass 
With weary notions derived from the past
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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May 15, 2009 at 4:32 PM
Hi Laura, this is excellent. It seems as if progress is progress. We never remain at the same starting point after the gate has been opened. Every day is a new day with much additions and improvements. Do you speak, write, and understand Italian? Great job! ~Joseph
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April 21, 2009 at 11:24 AM
what a wonderful 1st verse to soup ..couplet! Light & Love
Jordan Avatar
March 8, 2009 at 10:36 AM
Simply amazing Laura - Congratulations on being featured this last week - God Bless, MJ
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March 7, 2009 at 1:22 AM
Laura, congratulations on your featured poem this week. I love the message. Keep on posting and writing. Ernilando
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March 4, 2009 at 5:19 PM
Simply breathtaking ...You painted a fantastic portrait where I could picture myself there.. I have never been through a winter such as this, but you let me imagine it for a little bit..."Cold are the hands that plow it away Tired are their eyes covered with gray")Superb imagery and creativity...Congratulations on this well deserved lovely piece being featured this week..I wish you many more..God Bless
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March 3, 2009 at 12:52 PM
Congratulations Laura on the featuring of "A Winter From The Past." WE remember the warmth more than the harshness of those days past. God Bless. Vince
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March 3, 2009 at 9:31 AM
Congrats Laura on your featured write, bravo! Ernesto
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March 2, 2009 at 6:19 PM
Congratulations on this beautiful poetry being featured this week Laura! Love, Robin
Mason Avatar
March 2, 2009 at 3:14 PM
..."covered in a still dewy dream." Great line ... snuggling is so wonderful in the winter. Beautiful write here, Laura and a well-deserved selection to be a feature here at the Soup this week. Congratulations!
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March 2, 2009 at 12:57 PM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Laura. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
March 2, 2009 at 6:38 AM
Laura, so sorry I ever missed this. I will borrow from my dear, departed friend, Tom Bell and agree with his comment. Outstanding. The imagery is truly exceptional. Warmest congrats on a most excellent featured write. Love, Shar
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March 1, 2009 at 11:49 PM
Congrats on your feature this week Laura Rgds Brian
Richards Avatar
March 1, 2009 at 5:41 PM
Beautifully written, and well deserving to be featured this week! So melancholy and rather sad, but beautiful! ~ Carrie
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March 1, 2009 at 5:14 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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