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“Follow your dreams and never let them pale Be the star of a winter fairytale.” * * *
Once upon a time a sweet bonnie lass Did all her horrendous stepmother asked Toiling all day her dream kept her going That one day in love she would be glowing. Her girlish charm was a breath of fresh air Singing and dancing in spite of her cares She so missed her mother, now laid to rest But for her father's sake she did her best. One day when out shopping her dream came true Boy meets girl and love between the two grew She felt like a Princess who'd found her Prince And had been walking on air ever since. ‘Twas her lovely winter of wonderment Tho’ bleak and cold this love was heaven sent She could never speak of the joy she’d found For her life would become a battleground. Sadly their love never came to flourish Their meetings being too few and hurried Being trapped just like a bird in a cage She wouldn't risk raising her stepmothers rage. Endurance taken to upmost limit Tho' his love be generous in spirit Moon shadow's were cast o'er fated distress Gone was the amore that once took her breath. She had loved with womanly heart on fire Yet coming like a bouquet of barbed wire A mighty thunderbolt from out the blue She'd lost the one who'd sworn his love was true. Reliving memories of shattered dreams In yesterday's glorious reveries Tears came streaming, rolling like a river No more I-love-you's whispered in her ear. Then along came a fairy godmother Who waved her wand o’er one then the other The two she then joined in matrimony The rest is a blessed lifelong love story. * * *
23rd December 2020 Quote - Poet’s own.

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Date: 12/23/2020 10:13:00 AM
Those fairy godmothers know how much a girl needs a magic wand! Aloha! Rico
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/23/2020 1:51:00 PM
They certainly do Rico, thank you very much ... Belle
Date: 12/23/2020 9:58:00 AM
Oh I couldn't do without my fairy godmother, she has given me her phone number - its prefix gives away her abode away, such a celestial quite place, way up high in the sky and clouds - but she appears without a call, just thinking about her is enough and she appears - I think my commen has give me an idea for a poem. Love you poem Belle. A lovely and blessed Christmas to you and yours. Hugs Jennifer.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/23/2020 1:59:00 PM
You are so lucky Jennifer to have a fairy godmother of your own, and on the end of a phone too. I will look our for the poem you’re inspired to write. Hugs, Belle
Date: 12/23/2020 9:51:00 AM
Lovely writing... So like Cinderella too. God bless you with a bright and M E R R Y Christmas friend
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/23/2020 1:56:00 PM
Thank you Regina and God bless you too. May your Christmas be Merry, holy and bright dear friend... Belle
Date: 12/23/2020 8:51:00 AM
A lovely fairy tale Belle, hope you have a lovely Christmas and a happy new year. Tom
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/23/2020 1:53:00 PM
Thank you Tom, very appreciated... Merry Christmas and A Happy New Year ~ Belle
Date: 12/23/2020 6:10:00 AM
A sad tale but a parody on Cinderella. Wishing you a happy Christmas and hope you will enjoy my dance poem. ~~
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 12/23/2020 10:31:00 PM
Loved the revised ending. ~~
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/23/2020 8:18:00 AM
Thank you Victor, the fairytale now has a happy ending, thanks to you and Alexis. Will go now and read your dance poem.~~ Belle
Date: 12/23/2020 6:02:00 AM
Hi Belle, You have penned another well-written write. Your title alone caught my attention. Although the ending wasn't my forte, it's reality; things don't always work out the way we want them to. Excellent job.Well done. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Alexis Y.
Date: 12/23/2020 8:52:00 AM
Hi Belle, Your story was good before, but I must say, I do love the happy ending—my kind of fairy tale. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/23/2020 8:12:00 AM
Hi Alexis, I’ve taken on board on what you and Victor said and have given the tale a happy ending. Thank you for the inspirational comments... Belle :-)

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