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Surrendering fronds spread as songbirds inspiration alights, A wide-eyed newborn coos to outer wonder in dressed whites. Some children whispers in ears while playing, swing set in motion, as bundled toddlers climb aloft, pushed in thorough devotion. Carpets of cool colors change midst breaths of frost wind of cold creams, Blown visions drift, hugged smiles of red faces in castaway dreams. Snow angels and Frosty, sprinkles warmth to their adoring fans, As all grasp enjoyments structuring their creative iced plans. 2019 September 10

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Date: 9/10/2019 10:54:00 PM
Your imagery is marvelous. I can see this "as bundled toddlers climb aloft, pushed in thorough devotion."
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Date: 9/10/2019 11:04:00 PM
Ah, at least I can count on a fan of fans--a jump start of things ~ Aloha always William

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