A Wingless Angel Fallen From the Orion

You came down from the Orion to this damned earth. 
Somewhere in space you lost your heavenly wings. 
You have come far away from your place of birth. 
In coming down, you have brought numerous things. 

Among the presents you brought is your brilliance. 
The brilliance in your eyes is totally unrivaled. 
At your shining existence all beings sigh in resonance. 
Your celestial mind is a mysterious world untraveled. 

Deep in your eyes there is something wet. 
That wetness is unique to your own being. 
In no one else have I seen anything similar yet. 
To me your gleaming eyes are always tear-jerking. 

Dancing on the stage with your refined skin spotlighted, 
Your alluring smile grabs my whole existence. 
Even to the Antarctica I'd pursue you delighted. 
Your magical glow stands out in all this silence. 

For your love I could easily sacrifice my life. 
Your adorable thin lips make me tremble. 
Your ephemeral slender figure kills me as if with a knife. 
Your divine eternity always makes me humble. 

   (June 30, 2015)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/5/2017 9:27:00 AM
You have pointed out the message so clear, poetic, original and with a fantastic imagery expression. Thank you for this lovely share friend. This is definitely a star content.
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Date: 3/6/2017 4:47:00 AM
Wow, thank you, Funom, for your heart-warming compliment.
Date: 3/4/2017 8:29:00 AM
Well done Osamu, I love celestial poems. I see this is your first on the soup so let me say welcome, don't be shy and have fun. Ciao.
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Date: 3/4/2017 3:26:00 PM
Thank you, Phil, for your pep talk.
Date: 2/14/2017 8:36:00 PM
In return, haiku style: Celestial angels, Benign ones and evil ones, Don't treat us like toys
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Date: 2/14/2017 8:45:00 PM
Oh, thank you for your great haiku, Eisuke. If Shakespeare had known the art of haiku, he would definitely have written something like that.
Date: 2/14/2017 3:22:00 PM
Oh, Patricia, thank you very much for your kind response.
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Date: 2/14/2017 7:47:00 AM
Deep. thank you for sharing. It leaves you thinking of another life in an outer hemisphere with warmth. hugs x.
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Date: 2/14/2017 3:29:00 PM
Thank you very much for your response. I had a glance at the long list of your recent poems. That's impressive. I just read one about angels. I'll read more of your poems. Thanks again.
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