Jenna Logan Poet Rhyme

A Windswept Sea-Bite Size

Mournful tears flow in pale moonlight
Loneliness shadows me this dark night
I thirst for wings, hunger to take flight
on a journey across the windswept sea
until dawn or death washes over me



October 2, 2021
Bite Size Poem No 22 Contest
Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Paula Goldsmith October 12, 2021 at 11:07 AM Congratulations on your win. What a creative/sad~~story/write. Have a blessed day.................

Sam Kauffman October 11, 2021 at 12:09 PM Such a plaintive cry from the broken heart in the night Jenna. A vivid picture of pain. Congratulations on your win. Blessings.

Constance La France October 11, 2021 at 9:39 AM Jenna, congratulations on your placement in Line's contest with these beautiful rhyming lines and I really like your image too ~ love and serenity _Constance

Mark Koplin October 4, 2021 at 7:35 AM Very nice, I can feel your pain as if I were right next to you. Jenna Logan October 4, 2021 at 7:52 AM There is a bond. Thank you.

Mike Gentile October 3, 2021 at 6:08 AM Jenna, your emotions are powerfully expressed with this piece! I hope the dawn reaches you first!!! Well done! Jenna Logan October 3, 2021 at 6:27 AM Thanks for the well wishes, Mike. You're so kind.

L Milton Hankins October 2, 2021 at 9:53 AM Your imagery is stunning, Jenna. Enhanced by the picture. Best of luck in Line's contest. Jenna Logan October 3, 2021 at 6:26 AM I appreciate your complimentary thoughts, Milt. Thank you.

Tom Cunningham October 2, 2021 at 8:30 AM Quote a sad verse in a few lines Jenna where it seems all hope is gone. Tom Jenna Logan October 3, 2021 at 6:26 AM Writing this one made me feel sad. Good thing it was a short one. Thanks, Tom.