A Window

On a wall that is plain On a wall that is dull On a wall that is confining On a wall that is cruel A window is opened For you to look out For you to speak out For you to cry for help For you to communicate To the rest of the world Outside

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 1/21/2024 10:42:00 PM

An open window that's the broad mind, open to communicate without any hindrance to cultivate love where has no subtraction!~ inspired to write this after read this poem

Sai Lin Lip
Date: 1/22/2024 1:13:00 AM

Good.Thanks for reading.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/19/2021 6:57:00 PM

I hope you will shout out from that open window for the rest of the world to hear. Thank you for sharing.

Sai Lin Lip
Date: 6/21/2021 5:04:00 AM

People always have the habit to ignore things. They may not hear me then.