Unknown Unknown Poet Free verse

A Will of Fire

When your world darkens
When your will gets shattered
When your fire becomes weak
when your strings get cut
When your heart gets broken
When your about to give in

Think of why you have come this far
Think of why your fire is still burning 
Let it fuel you, let it ignite your soul
No matter what the world throws at you
No matter how bad you hurt, and want to give up
You must never give in and submit

Get up and take back control
Push yourself to the limits, never falter, never surrender
Pick up the pieces, get new strings, ignite yourself 
Make the darkness fear your will of fire, for you pain is temporary
The darkness will burn, it will weaken
Your will of fire will guide you and others out of the dark and into a new dawn

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Becca Teagan February 5, 2018 at 5:45 AM I love this strength in this poem. Very inspirational. I sure needed these words. Thank you. Unknown Unknown August 17, 2021 at 1:48 AM Words are always there when we are at our lowest, happy i could be here to help-Unknown

Carol B. November 15, 2016 at 5:30 PM Wow! This is a powerful piece! Great write:) Unknown Unknown November 17, 2016 at 3:03 AM Thank you very much -Unknown

Jolene Cheyney November 6, 2016 at 1:44 PM Thank you so much for writing this. And for posting it. You've inspired so many people with it. I know I have been renewed refreshed. I've had so many days lately that have been a challenge. I have been at my completely drained entirely. Physically mentally and emotionally. I feel like this speaks to me directly. Thank you again. Unknown Unknown November 7, 2016 at 3:01 AM I am glad I could be there to help you in a time of need, and thank you for taking the time to sit down and read my poem. -Unknown

Phil Capitano November 6, 2016 at 7:02 AM Great stuff UU, marvelous advice for the broken-spirited. Unknown Unknown November 6, 2016 at 12:33 PM Thank you-Unknown

Jennifer M. November 4, 2016 at 12:14 PM This poem is amazingly motivating. Just exactly what I needed to read today. Thank you so very much for sharing. Take care. Beblessed. Unknown Unknown November 6, 2016 at 12:32 PM Thank you, I'm glad that I could help-Unknown

Heidi Sands November 4, 2016 at 10:48 AM Outstanding Poem! What a great positive message of strength! Congratulations! :) Unknown Unknown November 6, 2016 at 12:31 PM Thank you- Unknown

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Probir Gupta October 27, 2016 at 5:47 AM Inspiration from unknown source is great ... Unknown Unknown October 27, 2016 at 9:17 AM Thank you

Phil Capitano October 27, 2016 at 4:00 AM Keep writing with skill and passion like this and you won't be Unknown for long.