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A Will of Fire

When your world darkens When your will gets shattered When your fire becomes weak when your strings get cut When your heart gets broken When your about to give in Think of why you have come this far Think of why your fire is still burning Let it fuel you, let it ignite your soul No matter what the world throws at you No matter how bad you hurt, and want to give up You must never give in and submit Get up and take back control Push yourself to the limits, never falter, never surrender Pick up the pieces, get new strings, ignite yourself Make the darkness fear your will of fire, for you pain is temporary The darkness will burn, it will weaken Your will of fire will guide you and others out of the dark and into a new dawn

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Date: 2/5/2018 5:45:00 AM
I love this strength in this poem. Very inspirational. I sure needed these words. Thank you.
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Date: 8/17/2021 1:48:00 AM
Words are always there when we are at our lowest, happy i could be here to help-Unknown
Date: 11/15/2016 5:30:00 PM
Wow! This is a powerful piece! Great write:)
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Date: 11/17/2016 3:03:00 AM
Thank you very much -Unknown
Date: 11/6/2016 1:44:00 PM
Thank you so much for writing this. And for posting it. You've inspired so many people with it. I know I have been renewed refreshed. I've had so many days lately that have been a challenge. I have been at my completely drained entirely. Physically mentally and emotionally. I feel like this speaks to me directly. Thank you again.
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Date: 11/7/2016 3:01:00 AM
I am glad I could be there to help you in a time of need, and thank you for taking the time to sit down and read my poem. -Unknown
Date: 11/6/2016 7:02:00 AM
Great stuff UU, marvelous advice for the broken-spirited.
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Date: 11/6/2016 12:33:00 PM
Thank you-Unknown
Date: 11/4/2016 12:14:00 PM
This poem is amazingly motivating. Just exactly what I needed to read today. Thank you so very much for sharing. Take care. Beblessed.
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Date: 11/6/2016 12:32:00 PM
Thank you, I'm glad that I could help-Unknown
Date: 11/4/2016 10:48:00 AM
Outstanding Poem! What a great positive message of strength! Congratulations! :)
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Date: 11/6/2016 12:31:00 PM
Thank you- Unknown
Date: 10/27/2016 11:05:00 AM
**U**Unknown , Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/27/2016 5:47:00 AM
Inspiration from unknown source is great ...
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Date: 10/27/2016 9:17:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 10/27/2016 4:00:00 AM
Keep writing with skill and passion like this and you won't be Unknown for long.
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