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A Wild Dream

A Shadorma A wild horse freedom’s fiery flight courage is his nature power to face Gaia’s moods flaming transitions. A stabled steed quickly fattened fortitude’s broken back long days awake memories no longer made, stilled. In corral fleeting dreams arise greet the day breaking free one jump and freedom anew just keeps beckoning.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/10/2019 11:28:00 PM

I love to see a horse running free, think it is mean to put horse shoes and bridles on them. Loved this one!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/11/2019 2:01:00 PM

Wild horses are one of the last great beautiful sights on this planet. Thanks.

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/1/2019 8:39:00 PM

love to see horse run wild...they would let them run nightly at a ranch i stayed at in montana, it was so cool to seem the difference in them between stable time and free roam time... enjoyed this one :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/6/2019 5:48:00 AM

My cousin had one that we didn't think he was going to be able to tame. It took quite a while. Thanks much.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/1/2019 7:30:00 AM

I like how you scripted the contrast..a wild horse loving his freedom..a stabled one yearning for his. A superb write.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/6/2019 5:48:00 AM

Thanks so much.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/1/2019 4:27:00 AM

I this fiction or real - I presume the horse got up and greeted a new day but he has broken his back in the poem, is it just wishful thinking on my part?

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/6/2019 5:50:00 AM

The wild horse being broken by man and the horse's reluctance to be tamed; he finally breaks free of the corral. No, it's fiction; I was recalling a horse a family member once had. Thanks.