A Whole New World

On the day when I was born,
I opened my eyes,
cried with fright,
and
saw the new world.
It was the day
of happiness
of father and mother.
From that day
until now,
the past ten years,
I learn and see
the whole new world
in front of me...............
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Agustin Avatar
April 10, 2025 at 10:08 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 22, 2016 at 9:28 PM
Winchaya Ieumwananonthachai, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
Esquire Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 2:06 PM
Dear Winchaya, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Congratulations on YOUR Winning POEM " A Whole New World" in the Contest "One of YOUR Greatest Days" Sponsored by Dan Kearley. Superb Free Verse. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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March 19, 2013 at 10:24 PM
Winchaya, , your poem is just beautiful, what a lovely way and day! Congratulations with your amazing poem, always~ LINDA
Ieumwananonthachai Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 8:15 PM
I'm just eleven years old. Please tell me if I wrote or spelled anything wrong. :)
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