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A Whole Lot of Shakin'

There's a whole lotta shakin' goin' on
Whenever I walk down the street
People all stop and stare at me
But I'm no longer considered a freak

The percentage of overweight people
Is increasing in leaps and bounds
It's surely an epidemic the experts say
We really need to slow it down

I'm certainly not alone in my plight
The numbers are quite disarming
Studies show more than sixty per cent
Are overweight, that's really alarming

Put on some comfy old walking shoes
Walk a few times round the block
Better than watching the telly all day
And drinking beer around the clock

It's a dangerous path to oblivion
That we, as a society are travelling
Our whole way of life is in jeopardy
It's in danger and quickly unravelling

There will be a time of reckoning soon 
The life we once knew will be gone
We'll all become a bunch of inert blobs
Lacking the will to carry on

©Jack Ellison 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/17/2018 2:19:00 AM
Got to keep rolling on, rolls or not! Exercise is always good - it is alarming, the growing numbers. This inspires me to keep with my evening runs, thank you dear Jack! Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/17/2018 5:55:00 AM
Since writing this, I have lost 60 lbs!!! Proud? You betcha! XOX
Date: 9/14/2012 11:18:00 AM
Facinating write. You did the topic justice.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/14/2012 11:24:00 AM
At one time this was me but no longer! This mission I'm on has allowed me to drop 25 lbs since June 4th! Yee haw! Thanks Carol for your encouraging comments... love and hugs, Jack

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