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A White Dress

I saw a perfect shade of white So elegant That it must have been a figment So elegant Thump, Thump, Thump, Thump Says the heart in my chest When it sees you The way it lays on you Is stellar and sublime like the clouds in the sky A white dress so perfect That it blinds me with your radiating fairness The whiteness of a soul Is a cool shade of grey compared to your beauty Tremble, Tremble My knees are now dancing In your presence A rare sparkling jewel you are Gleaming brightly Like a white sun parting the clouds Gleaming brightly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/22/2014 10:17:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win for your latest poem, trevor
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Trevor Barnett
Date: 3/22/2014 12:37:00 PM
Thank you very much Dr. Ram Metha!
Date: 3/22/2014 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations on this great write and win my dear friend. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your precious gem. Thank u so much for sharing and your loving support in my contest. Big warm hugs! Love lots, Leonora
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Trevor Barnett
Date: 3/22/2014 12:36:00 PM
Thank you so much Leonora, and you're very welcome anytime!
Date: 3/22/2014 7:18:00 AM
- Nice to read your "Latest Poem" in the contest sponsored by: Leonora Galinta :) - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN, TREVOR ! - Will also wish you an enjoyable weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Trevor Barnett
Date: 3/22/2014 12:35:00 PM
Thank you very much Anne, and you have a lovely weekend as well! :)
Date: 3/16/2014 1:40:00 AM
A nice thumping sound Trevor... your heart speaks beautiful for you...LINDA
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Trevor Barnett
Date: 3/16/2014 12:58:00 PM
Thank you so much Linda! Have a nice day!
Date: 3/6/2014 9:03:00 PM
a romantic one here!! I like your imagery. congrats.
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Trevor Barnett
Date: 3/7/2014 12:29:00 AM
Thank you very much Andrea!
Date: 3/5/2014 2:00:00 PM
An awesome write! Congrats on the win!!!
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Trevor Barnett
Date: 3/5/2014 4:27:00 PM
Thank you so much Abdulhafe!
Date: 3/5/2014 7:38:00 AM
Beautiful images. Congrats on your win
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Trevor Barnett
Date: 3/5/2014 10:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Monterey!
Date: 3/5/2014 7:04:00 AM
Congrats on the worthy win Trevor.
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Trevor Barnett
Date: 3/5/2014 10:16:00 AM
Your comment is much appreciated Kayode!
Date: 3/5/2014 6:50:00 AM
- Hi Trevor, congratulations on your fine winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Trevor Barnett
Date: 3/5/2014 10:17:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne, and have a wonderful day!
Date: 3/5/2014 5:36:00 AM
Lovely poem. Congratulations on the fine win, trevor
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Trevor Barnett
Date: 3/5/2014 10:18:00 AM
Thank you very much Dr. Ram Metha!
Date: 3/1/2014 11:12:00 AM
Thank you very much, and thanks for stopping by!
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Date: 3/1/2014 5:18:00 AM
hi, Trevor a lovely image, picture perfect for the best day. Skat
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