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In memory of my sister-in-law that passed Tuesday 13, 2022

a white dove above their soul a languid breath left~ painful sobs of numbing grief life curtain slowly closes memories slowly transform ~ fades in and fades out wind drifts and fondles quaking curtain unveiling~ their true essence never leaves 12/15/2022 7-5-7 7-7-5 5-7-7 Triple New Charlieku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Date: 1/7/2023 12:18:00 AM
So beautifully written, Eve ! Sad that your sister in law left for her Heavenly abode. Let us hope that she enjoys eternal bliss, hovered around by a white dove! Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Date: 1/5/2023 10:08:00 AM
wow, this is a very well written spiritual set of haiku. Love it, Eve. Congrats here.
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Date: 1/5/2023 7:07:00 AM
So well done, Eve. Simply beautiful. Your win is well-deserved. Congratulations
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Date: 1/4/2023 9:18:00 PM
"numbing grief" - beautiful adjective. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/4/2023 8:08:00 PM
Beautifully written, Eve. Congratulations on your win! Happy New Year! :) Charlie
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Date: 12/28/2022 6:39:00 PM
Condolences Eve! On the loss of your sister. How painful. For you. Prayers for you tonight, my !sweet friend Such amazing Haikus Panagiota
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Date: 12/16/2022 8:05:00 AM
Your haikus are wonderful. Not my tooth though. Hugs.
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Date: 12/15/2022 6:17:00 PM
I just noticed this was in memory of your Sister in Law. I didn't notice it previously. I'm so sorry for your loss, Eve. My heartfelt condolences..
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/15/2022 6:33:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words. Many blessings to you and Merry Christmas.
Date: 12/15/2022 6:12:00 PM
An absolute exquisite haiku, dear Eve ! Really enjoyed this gem.. Many blessings to you!
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