A Whisper

I love you, he said, but a wind came along
and replaced his words with the ocean's fair song

I need you, he yelled, but then thunder and rain,
shattered his voice with no sign of remain

I want you, he screamed, with all might of his breath
Yet not one seemed to know, like the rattle of death

Now his lips do not speak, not a word, nor a cry
there is silence and peace in the depth of his eye

But just listen and hear, how the wind whistles sweet
You will hear it brings whispers of longing heartbeat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Agustin Avatar
December 4, 2024 at 12:43 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 28, 2016 at 7:49 AM
Stine Andersen, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 7, 2016 at 12:50 AM
Wonderful poem. SKAT
Cavanaugh Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 6:43 AM
Great poem here. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Gasun Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 2:36 AM
An awesome couplet you've penned my dear Stine. I have enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing! hugs:) Leonora
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