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A Whisper

I love you, he said, but a wind came along and replaced his words with the ocean's fair song I need you, he yelled, but then thunder and rain, shattered his voice with no sign of remain I want you, he screamed, with all might of his breath Yet not one seemed to know, like the rattle of death Now his lips do not speak, not a word, nor a cry there is silence and peace in the depth of his eye But just listen and hear, how the wind whistles sweet You will hear it brings whispers of longing heartbeat

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 2/28/2016 7:49:00 AM
Stine Andersen, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/7/2016 12:50:00 AM
Wonderful poem. SKAT
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Date: 10/15/2012 6:43:00 AM
Great poem here. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
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Date: 10/11/2012 2:36:00 AM
An awesome couplet you've penned my dear Stine. I have enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing! hugs:) Leonora
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