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"A Whiskers Tale: Watching the Detectives" Her whiskers tickle when the lights go out hormonal huntress on the prowl Moonlight chasing itsy bitsies up the wall a silent investigator tap dancing silently soft as mink and sibilant paws poised across a different kind of polished slippery dance floor criminally inclined researching minds a baby in her isolation crib for sure soft-shoe shuffling never bored. (LadyLabyrith / 2021) "Dans le fond des forêts votre image me suit." "Watching the Detectives" / Elvis Costello https://youtu.be/xO_sDtI2bYk "Everyday I Write the Book" https://youtu.be/ekrzLtCKMJg " I shut my doors on that dark guilt, I bolt the door, each door I bolt. Blood quickens, gonging in my ears: The panther's tread is on the stairs, Coming up and up the stairs..." Inspiration: "MoonLight" "Pursuit"/Sylvia Plath https://neuroticpoets.com/plath/poem/pursuit/

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Date: 4/7/2021 8:11:00 PM
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/7/2021 8:32:00 PM
gvlm. x
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/7/2021 8:23:00 PM
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Date: 4/7/2021 7:31:00 PM
I really like this, Lady Labyrinth! I love the line about Moonlight chasing itsy bitsies up the wall. Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/7/2021 7:52:00 PM
She's determined to annihilate anything that is a bug...xx
Date: 4/7/2021 4:00:00 PM
Hello Lady Labyrinth, I never had a cat. One day i will. enjoyed your poetry. Take care Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/8/2021 10:16:00 AM
Hello Lady Labyrinth, Oh ,I am glad. Lady Labyrinth. enjoy your day.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/7/2021 4:08:00 PM
Better than a gun Lady De Beaulieu. Tickled you enjoyed...x
Date: 4/7/2021 3:19:00 PM
Cats can be frisky
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/7/2021 3:29:00 PM
They are excellent cockroach hunters. It's the pterodactyl yowls they deliver when offering them to you as a treat to consume at 3.33am ; that's the killer.
Date: 4/7/2021 3:04:00 PM
Who needs a gun when you have a ...cat. ;) x
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