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My friends said it couldn't be done; so I thought it might be fun. And though it felt like a dream, l assembled my ground team. I took my time explaining what I was entertaining. And they gathered all I'd need, including a bag of feed. Now, hippos aren't meant to fly; and yet, I'm willing to try. But balloons will have to do; although it will take a few. I then asked my pigeon friend if he would help me descend. And pop a balloon or two; when my whimsical flight's through. That way, I'll slowly drift down, till I'm safely on the ground. It's such an exciting day; I'm stoked to get underway. I'm scared, yet I'm loving it; and don't regret it a bit! I'm floating amidst the clouds, peering down on cheering crowds.

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Date: 5/21/2023 8:18:00 PM
Great my friend thank you so much for the enjoyable read... it will be added Many blessings
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Date: 5/22/2023 7:10:00 AM
Thanks, Eve; I appreciate your comments and look forward to your book, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/6/2023 9:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win and thank you for entering your poem, we truly enjoyed your nice and tidy format :)
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Date: 5/7/2023 10:06:00 AM
Thanks, BJ; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/29/2021 2:03:00 PM
Emile, congratulations on your Second Place in my "W" New Poems Contest. Your poem is wonderful and delightful ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 11/30/2021 6:44:00 AM
Thanks, Constance, I appreciate the placement my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/25/2021 8:31:00 PM
Hahaha! So entertaining! Congrats on your win, Emile
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Date: 11/26/2021 7:01:00 AM
Thanks, Unseeing, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/25/2021 7:08:00 PM
Wonderful whimsical poem, Emile. Best of luck in the contest. It flows so well--up and down! (chuckling)
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Date: 11/26/2021 7:01:00 AM
Thanks, Milt, a little whimsy to cheer things up my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/25/2021 2:41:00 PM
Wow! Emile, I love your lighthearted, yet brilliant poem - your flight is whimsical, but nothing beats the fun! I really enjoyed reading it - and the rhyming lines seem so effortless and flowing! Congratulations on your win. Warm wishes ~ Mala
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/25/2021 4:01:00 PM
Thanks, Mala, just a bit of fun my friend, Emile.

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