A Whimsical Flight

My friends said it couldn't be done: so, I thought it might be fun. And though it felt like a dream: I assembled my ground team. I took my time explaining: what I was contemplating. And they gathered all I'd need: including a bag of feed. Now, hippos aren't meant to fly: yet I am willing to try. But balloons will have to do: though, it will take quite a few. I then asked my sniper friend: if he would help me descend? And pop a balloon or two: when my whimsical flight's through. That way, I'll slowly drift down: till I'm safely on the ground. It's such an exciting day: I'm stoked to get underway! I'm scared: yet, I'm loving it: and don't regret it a bit! I'm floating amidst the clouds: peering down on cheering crowds. Who'd have guessed hippos could fly: I'm so happy I could cry. Floating on a sea of air: without a worry or care.
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Roper Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 8:18 PM
Great my friend thank you so much for the enjoyable read... it will be added Many blessings
Pinet Avatar
May 22, 2023 at 7:10 AM
Thanks, Eve; I appreciate your comments and look forward to your book, my friend, Emile.
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 9:39 PM
Congratulations on your win and thank you for entering your poem, we truly enjoyed your nice and tidy format :)
Pinet Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 10:06 AM
Thanks, BJ; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 2:03 PM
Emile, congratulations on your Second Place in my "W" New Poems Contest. Your poem is wonderful and delightful ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Pinet Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 6:44 AM
Thanks, Constance, I appreciate the placement my friend, Emile.
Seeker Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 8:31 PM
Hahaha! So entertaining! Congrats on your win, Emile
Pinet Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 7:01 AM
Thanks, Unseeing, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
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November 25, 2021 at 7:08 PM
Wonderful whimsical poem, Emile. Best of luck in the contest. It flows so well--up and down! (chuckling)
Pinet Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 7:01 AM
Thanks, Milt, a little whimsy to cheer things up my friend, Emile.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 2:41 PM
Wow! Emile, I love your lighthearted, yet brilliant poem - your flight is whimsical, but nothing beats the fun! I really enjoyed reading it - and the rhyming lines seem so effortless and flowing! Congratulations on your win. Warm wishes ~ Mala
Pinet Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 4:01 PM
Thanks, Mala, just a bit of fun my friend, Emile.
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