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A Wet Embrace

a fine blanket of sand toasts a calloused skin a definitive bouquet a calming pitch the ocean embraces me and I submit

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/2/2014 3:33:00 PM
I love this kind, short and well thought out, Maurice. If you played with it, it could be made into an ideal tanka! This is the kind I love to fave though I enjoyed your story immensely too. I hope tonight will be better for you than last night. You are such a kind and patient man!
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Date: 8/25/2014 9:09:00 AM
I really like the descriptive imagery of this short piece, Maurice. I am always amazed when someone can put so much into just a few words. Very nice. Jim
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Date: 8/25/2014 11:42:00 AM
thank you so much.

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