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A Well-Kept Secret

There's a quick remedy for those neglected smiles, even your dentist won't tell you that... it's still a well-kept secret; grandma whispered it to mother, and mother to daughter, but not father to son? Isn't it hypocritical, boys? All women must be kissed by impatient men, and what's more attractive than teeth whitened by inexpensive baking soda, guys? It's time you made yours whiter than Paul's!

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Date: 7/7/2013 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations, with your winning poem .... xox~ PD
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Date: 7/1/2013 12:20:00 PM
Very well done piece! Congrats on your smashing win. AO
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Date: 6/30/2013 3:22:00 PM
Hopefully Paul has learned the secret of very white teeth. Very enjoyable reading about this timeless secret... I have used baking soda from time to time myself... great originality :)
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Date: 6/29/2013 3:38:00 PM
Andrew, :-) Congratulations in my awesome SECRET contest. don't know if the secret is totally out. I'm loving all the winners & poems that spoke to me in their own way. enjoy my blog if you like, peace and love. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/10/2010 2:57:00 PM
good one hon & so true bad teeth really bother me always have! I did not get your last soup mail it had an error so I couldn't see what you wanted to tell me...BUT hugs anyway!
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Date: 7/8/2010 12:29:00 AM
soup mail andrew
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