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Slight revision of an old poem of mine

I breathe in quietude and face a welcome tranquil scene. A beautiful secluded place greets my eyes with iridescent sheen beneath a wintry sky serene. Here along this country lane, diamond flecks have interlaced and softly fallen on terrain. The dull and barren land has been effaced; by dazzling snow my world is graced. The air is fresh and crisp and clean. Enchantment rules the day! Winter, when you are pristine and when grey clouds have fled away. . . I welcome you to stay. Jan. 14, 2022 For M. L. Kiser's Winter Wonders Within Nature Poetry Contest For Brian Strand's Your Choice 2022 Poetry Contest

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Date: 11/15/2024 7:08:00 PM
Lovely! It made me look forward to Winter's coming snow... I hope...:)
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Date: 1/24/2022 1:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Lovely imagery! :) Paulette
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Date: 1/23/2022 8:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea . Hugs and blessings for a better year in your life
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Date: 1/23/2022 7:01:00 PM
"Enchantment rules the day" - Beautifully said. Great poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/23/2022 5:06:00 PM
It is so nice to read this again Andrea. Congratulations on your win. We are on this list together. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/19/2022 9:09:00 AM
Beautiful. Soup mail will not go thru. will email u. love phyl
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Date: 1/17/2022 7:15:00 PM
Very calming!
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Date: 1/16/2022 5:54:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, great for a win.
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Date: 1/16/2022 10:54:00 AM
A lovely winter scene is simply enchanting Andrea. You have conveyed this beautifully in your entry. This should do well in the contest. I entered this contest too. Have a nice holiday weekend. My grandson was born on M.L.K. Day. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/16/2022 2:14:00 AM
You painted a joyful snowy wonderland in this crisp and fresh poem! It reminds me of pretty images on Christmas card's <3
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Date: 1/15/2022 3:33:00 PM
Your humility is amazing, considering the beautiful and consoling poems you pen. Thank you for sharing with us. All you can do is enter, the results or out of your hands. I never read anything you've written that was not a winner in my eyes. Peace and warmth to you this winter, Bill
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Date: 1/15/2022 2:51:00 PM
What an exquisite write on the of tranquility. Absolutely amazing. Thanks for the splendid share!
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Date: 1/15/2022 7:36:00 AM
OH YEAH!!!! that crisp clear cold of new fallen snow wafting on a passing breeze. Well done Andrea this captures well that pristine moment.
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Date: 1/15/2022 3:59:00 AM
What a wonderful entry for the contest, MLK will love this, she loves nature and you have caught the magic of Winter in this stupendous write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/15/2022 1:57:00 AM
No better scene in all its glory, a winter wonderland. Tom
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Date: 1/14/2022 11:58:00 PM
Your wintry scene should be on the canvas, though I prefer Spring. Hugs.
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Date: 1/14/2022 7:44:00 PM
wonderful flow and flair Andrea...I hope you are doing well :)
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Date: 1/14/2022 7:22:00 PM
Very beautifully written, Andrea! I love the wintry imagery you so deftly “paint” with your poetic words! Enjoyed! :)
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Date: 1/14/2022 1:03:00 PM
This is such good writing, Andrea. Especially loved the peaceful pastoral scene it portrayed so well.
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Date: 1/14/2022 12:03:00 PM
Hello Andrea, this poem is so peaceful. it has the calmness effect. Hugs.
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Date: 1/14/2022 11:12:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea, for writing such a well-written poem on such an important topic. I appreciate it. Yes, a Clean Earth program is unquestionably the most effective option! Well done.
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Date: 1/14/2022 10:27:00 AM
Yes, a Clean Earth policy is clearly best! Enjoyed! Aloha!
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