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A Weeping Willow Mourns

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Beneath a weeping willow tree, my love lays in death- I missed his last breath, he wanted to be free. Did he have a plan, to be beneath this willow? Life had broken this man, and he had become a shadow . Suddenly, weeping leaves are falling, and my name, softly calling. ______________________ January 14, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/A Weeping Willow Mourns Copyright Protected, ID 18-9825-32-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, 10 lines, 5 Words Rhyme II sponsor, Laura Loo Inspiration #1 A Weeping Willow Mourns First Place

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Date: 1/21/2018 8:57:00 PM
Wow - wonderful poem. Congrats on your very well deserved win, BW.
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Date: 1/20/2018 7:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings , beautiful and heartfelt! Hugs Eve~`*
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Date: 1/20/2018 4:49:00 PM
so sad but so lovely with your unique melancholy style, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/20/2018 3:34:00 PM
A worthy winner, congratulations Broken Wings! :-) Mick
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Date: 1/20/2018 10:58:00 AM
love everything about this. the rhythm and rhyme scheme, the theme, You did outstanding as always sweet lady, congrats and thank you! :)-luloo
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Date: 1/16/2018 8:18:00 PM
Sad but so lovely, Constance! Janice
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Date: 1/15/2018 6:51:00 AM
I feel the pain in your words..well communicated message of grief.. best for a win, BW.
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