A Weeping Willow Mourns

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Constance La France.


Related image

Beneath a weeping willow tree,
       my love lays in death-
I missed his last breath,
he wanted to be free.
       Did he have a plan,
       to be beneath this willow?
    Life had broken this man,
    and he had become a shadow .
Suddenly, weeping leaves are falling,
and my name, softly calling.

______________________
January 14, 2018

Poetry/Rhyme/A Weeping Willow Mourns
Copyright Protected,  ID 18-9825-32-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym. 


Written for the contest, 10 lines, 5 Words Rhyme II
sponsor, Laura Loo

Inspiration #1  A Weeping Willow Mourns

First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/21/2018 8:57:00 PM
Wow - wonderful poem. Congrats on your very well deserved win, BW.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/20/2018 7:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings , beautiful and heartfelt! Hugs Eve~`*
Login to Reply
Date: 1/20/2018 4:49:00 PM
so sad but so lovely with your unique melancholy style, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 1/20/2018 3:34:00 PM
A worthy winner, congratulations Broken Wings! :-) Mick
Login to Reply
Date: 1/20/2018 10:58:00 AM
love everything about this. the rhythm and rhyme scheme, the theme, You did outstanding as always sweet lady, congrats and thank you! :)-luloo
Login to Reply
Date: 1/16/2018 8:18:00 PM
Sad but so lovely, Constance! Janice
Login to Reply
Date: 1/15/2018 6:51:00 AM
I feel the pain in your words..well communicated message of grief.. best for a win, BW.
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad