Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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A Weeping Willow Mourns

Beneath a weeping willow tree,
       my love lays in death-
I missed his last breath,
he wanted to be free.
       Did he have a plan,
       to be beneath this willow?
    Life had broken this man,
    and he had become a shadow .
Suddenly, weeping leaves are falling,
and my name, softly calling.

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January 14, 2018

Poetry/Rhyme/A Weeping Willow Mourns
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Written for the contest, 10 lines, 5 Words Rhyme II
sponsor, Laura Loo

Inspiration #1  A Weeping Willow Mourns

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Line Gauthier January 21, 2018 at 8:57 PM Wow - wonderful poem. Congrats on your very well deserved win, BW.

Eve Roper January 20, 2018 at 7:07 PM Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings , beautiful and heartfelt! Hugs Eve~`*

Jan Allison January 20, 2018 at 4:49 PM so sad but so lovely with your unique melancholy style, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Mick Talbot January 20, 2018 at 3:34 PM A worthy winner, congratulations Broken Wings! :-) Mick

Beautiful Scars January 20, 2018 at 10:58 AM love everything about this. the rhythm and rhyme scheme, the theme, You did outstanding as always sweet lady, congrats and thank you! :)-luloo

Janice Canerdy January 16, 2018 at 8:18 PM Sad but so lovely, Constance! Janice

Vijay Pandit January 15, 2018 at 6:51 AM I feel the pain in your words..well communicated message of grief.. best for a win, BW.