A Weathervane

a weathervane still points east 'pon gray ancient barn... fall's air rust tractors the vain weathervane speaks east and rust grows though no one knows rusty John Deere sits outside engine deep in grass... bucks face off for fight the leaves are falling revealing the trees fractures fall air thrust factors crimson, gold, and red leaves fall farm lake ~ mural of the scene John Deere the artist tractors in the grass like clouds wearing the weather
Rengay Collaboration between Poet # 1 and Poet # 2 Poet # One, 1, 3, 5 Poet # Two...2, 4, 6
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Loving Iii Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 4:55 PM
wow congrads to us!!! i had no ideal and this contest i'm sure was judged fairly with no favorites. except her being the favorite of many. so glad to share this with you, you who mean so much. john
Lamoureux Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 3:33 PM
So well done, a big congratulations.
Jerden Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 1:54 PM
Wow, these read almost like strung together haikus. Great imagery! Congratulations.
May Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 11:15 AM
Congrats on a fine win Sara
A   Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 10:23 PM
This is a beautiful form Sara, hope you are feeling well...I did not see you on line today... HUGS...lINDA
Sivey Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 7:38 AM
Another awesome great collaboration my friend! You are getting good at writing these collab's Sara! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a lovely piece, I would love to read the final product! Excellent Work!!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace