A Weakness Among Us

When the rain falls from
Heavens that God created,
we accept through Faith.

When a story's told 
of long ago we doubt, Oh  
Ye of little faith ..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Allison Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 2:13 PM
Bravo Judy I found this little gem on TPS list of favourite poems - they have excellent taste my friend!!!:-) hugs jan xx
Carmack Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 8:00 PM
Impressive Judy.
A  Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 1:52 PM
Judy, congrats on your win. SKAT
Konos Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 7:40 AM
Hey SKAT.....thanks
Merryman Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 1:50 PM
Thought provoking! Congrats on your win, Judy! Love, Kim
Konos Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 8:27 PM
Thank You Kim....Love your last name....and its a WOW for the holidays....
Lamoureux Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 8:32 AM
Congratulations Judy!
Konos Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 9:06 AM
Hellooooooo Richard......thanks ......
Cheema Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 11:43 AM
Ultimately life works on faith! Congrats Judy!
Konos Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 9:20 PM
Thanks a lot Balveen....Nice name...I like it...
A. Sharma Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 3:55 AM
Congrats on ur win with this poem Judy.. great work!
Konos Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 5:09 AM
Thank you Upma...
Pettit Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 9:38 AM
Nice writings, but these are more of a senryu type than a haiku. Any reference to God makes these types of writes a senryu.
Konos Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 6:52 AM
Took me 4 years to get around to this but you are quite correct! Thank you Robert....
Song Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 9:29 AM
Very nice. Doubting is not pleasing to God, is it? I like your haiku.
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