A Way To Freedom

Bright enough when you call for peace;
the bonds around you would release.
looking for your path without a lease;
freedom passes by as a swift breeze;
try to catch it before it would cease.
...belief, faith. love and care.
the meaning of one's rights around to share.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 4:30 PM
All is well english wise on this one...I would call it Couplet form though. Light & love
Loveless Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 11:04 AM
I cant help but love the msg in this one. Nice work ~Rain
Fraser Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 12:25 PM
Excellent message in your poem Hanan, many congratulations on your 6th place in Matt's contest >> James
Ra Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 3:59 AM
Nice poem.
Mehta Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 4:06 AM
Nice thoughts well expressed
Nutter Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 3:16 AM
Excellent way to start my day, enjoyed this read with my morning coffee.
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May 24, 2010 at 2:51 AM
spoken out loud love the message in your poetry this morning, enjoyed and have yourself a nice day,..p..d
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