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A Way To Freedom

Bright enough when you call for peace; the bonds around you would release. looking for your path without a lease; freedom passes by as a swift breeze; try to catch it before it would cease. ...belief, faith. love and care. the meaning of one's rights around to share.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/7/2010 4:30:00 PM
All is well english wise on this one...I would call it Couplet form though. Light & love
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Date: 6/1/2010 11:04:00 AM
I cant help but love the msg in this one. Nice work ~Rain
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Date: 5/31/2010 12:25:00 PM
Excellent message in your poem Hanan, many congratulations on your 6th place in Matt's contest >> James
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Date: 5/30/2010 3:59:00 AM
Nice poem.
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Date: 5/24/2010 4:06:00 AM
Nice thoughts well expressed
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Date: 5/24/2010 3:16:00 AM
Excellent way to start my day, enjoyed this read with my morning coffee.
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Date: 5/24/2010 2:51:00 AM
spoken out loud love the message in your poetry this morning, enjoyed and have yourself a nice day,..p..d
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