A Watery World

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babbling brooks babble green algae proliferate... fry explore their world 05,22,2019 Writing Challenge 3, May 2019, Nature Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Dear Heart

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/27/2019 9:57:00 PM

Beautiful image, Emile, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/28/2019 9:33:00 AM

Thanks Eve, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Constance La France

Date: 5/27/2019 9:51:00 AM

Emile congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful haiku and I love the image too!

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/27/2019 2:55:00 PM

Thanks Constance, I rarely write Haiku my friend, but they can be fun, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2019 3:06:00 PM

Oh now i see your explanation of that word to Kim. Sorry about that!! Now it makes great sense to me.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/26/2019 5:25:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, I wasn't aware that people might not know that young fish are referred to as fry, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2019 3:05:00 PM

I did not understand the word fry in line three but I really love the algae portrayed with the brook and that beautiful picture. Congrats in the contest.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/26/2019 5:22:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.