A Waterfall Moment

A cascade of white among the verdigris tickles the ferns below as singing frogs leap about, cooling themselves in water-play. On a nearby rock, I enjoy the rushing water’s breeze.
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Krutsinger Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 2:59 PM
I can hear the water and feel my toes sliding in.
Kiser Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 8:33 AM
Cool isn't it?
Theraven Avatar
September 13, 2020 at 7:41 PM
M.L., I can almost see the water, feel the coolness, hear the breeze in this poem. -Richard
Kiser Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 4:19 AM
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Buhagiar Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 5:09 AM
Great pastoral view. Always quaint. ~~
Kiser Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 4:19 AM
Thank you.
Ermine Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 4:20 AM
Dear M. L... Thanks for taking me there..... In brief form, affords several slow reads, and gazes. Like the outside in rhyme. Verse bounces like the froggies within.
Kiser Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 4:19 AM
You are welcome, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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