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A Waterfall Moment

A cascade of white among the verdigris tickles the ferns below as singing frogs leap about, cooling themselves in water-play. On a nearby rock, I enjoy the rushing water’s breeze.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/19/2020 2:59:00 PM

I can hear the water and feel my toes sliding in.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/22/2020 8:33:00 AM

Cool isn't it?

Quoth Theraven

Date: 9/13/2020 7:41:00 PM

M.L., I can almost see the water, feel the coolness, hear the breeze in this poem. -Richard

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/15/2020 4:19:00 AM

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/11/2020 5:09:00 AM

Great pastoral view. Always quaint. ~~

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/15/2020 4:19:00 AM

Thank you.

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 9/8/2020 4:20:00 AM

Dear M. L... Thanks for taking me there..... In brief form, affords several slow reads, and gazes. Like the outside in rhyme. Verse bounces like the froggies within.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/15/2020 4:19:00 AM

You are welcome, I'm glad you enjoyed it.