A Waterfall

I'm so excited to see you babe


You are one thing I get so anxious to embrace


and I know we'll soon engage in all contact


I've been craving to be with you


Time away from you only drains me



Within your vicinity there is the mist


A phone call is just a mist


but I'm thirsy for you!


You're affection is essential to me



I've had a taste and this is not an addiction


I know what's good for me


I've been so dehydrated and I didn't reaize it


I've been so used to dehydration



Until I was exposed to you I never knew what it was to be quenched


but this is not addiction babe


This is restoration


but what is water without a host?


What is rain without land?


What's been given to you is the sea


The paths you choose are the clouds


You -  


Are the rain


and I the Earth

See you soon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/26/2021 9:02:00 AM
A waterfall hopefully with a rainbow shinning through the mist
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Date: 7/28/2018 8:45:00 AM
A beautiful piece.
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Date: 7/18/2018 8:59:00 PM
Love this piece!!! The imagery is spot on!!!
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Date: 7/15/2018 6:12:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem, Britt! Have you not written much since 2015? Thanks for the visit and I hope to see more from you.
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Date: 4/8/2016 2:15:00 AM
JustcallMe Britt, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/23/2015 11:27:00 PM
nice write... SKAT
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