A Warm Summers Day

Time stood still on this warm summer day Flowers full bloom as their sweet scent wafts upon the warm summer breeze The clear stream weaves it's way between the trees as their full leaves provide shade from the heat of the day, two squirrels playfully caught in a game of tag while a robin sits perched in her nest taking a quick nap before her offspring wakes demanding to be fed Even the cat and dog play together on this beautiful afternoon when mother comes out of the house carrying a basket of wet clothes to hang on the clothes line so they can drink in the days many scents sealing it into every fiber smelling of this gorgeous day when the next one Pulls it from the closet and holds the freshness to their nose Ahh today is a perfect summer day Holding all those summer smells, and sights all teasing my senses I'm enjoying all these things happening in front of me Then I closed my eyes to fall into a peaceful sleep where I dreamt of the very same things I had seen Beauty that's followed me into my dreams Sponsor Brian Strand YOUR CHOICE(8),any form,any theme Poetry Contest
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Lamoureux Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 8:14 AM
You are good at these, congrats on a deserved win Brenda. Hugs Rick.
Chiri Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 11:26 AM
Thank you Rick! John Fleming told me to try to be more descriptive and I guess it works!;)
Fleming Avatar
July 14, 2019 at 12:53 AM
I thought I had commented already on this charming piece of prose...but apparently not: I find it all quite contentedly dreamy -- a lovely write!! With much fondness. :) john
Chiri Avatar
July 14, 2019 at 3:33 AM
I'm so glad you liked this one John! No you has not commented but so glad you have now!;) All my affection!;)
Gauthier Avatar
June 15, 2019 at 6:29 PM
Lovely imagery, Brenda. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Chiri Avatar
June 15, 2019 at 7:02 PM
Thank you Line!;)
Gondolf Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 11:34 AM
Very lovely, Bren, it reminds me of early summer mornings when I was growing up. All my best. John
Chiri Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 1:22 PM
See that how it was for me! Thank you John! You are too kind!;)
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 10:16 AM
ahh a dream going into a dream. What a creative conclusion this led to. Very lovely, Brenda.
Chiri Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 10:39 AM
Andrea thank you! I thought the day needed described a bit differently then it has been over and over! ;)
Roper Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 9:33 AM
Beautiful dream, Brenda, nature so beautiful when all in play and musical... love the verse. Hugs
Chiri Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 10:38 AM
Eve thank you do very much for your warm comment!;)
Sands Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 9:08 AM
Beautifully written Brenda! Very nice :)
Chiri Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 10:37 AM
Thank you Heidi I really appreciate that! ;)
Mcconnell Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 3:39 PM
Nice one Brenda, good penning indeed! have a great weekend, Gordon
Chiri Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 9:19 PM
Gordon thank you so very much!
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