A Waltz For Mother

These sobs have never stopped and tears still flow
as dripping leaves after a summer's storm;
this wailing son has lost his joy to sorrow
refusing to be consoled; today, your favorite flowers
I lay on your grave and leave you lovely prayers
by the silver cross for you to read and feel warm
on winter's lonely and cold days
that will drift into the sun's fading glow.



This waltz is for you, mother smiling from Heaven...
and I will dance it while the robins
and larks watch, thinking I am mad to have chosen
a place of mourning and tranquility 
with cypresses offering a pleasant breeze;
would I do this if I didn't love you truly?



Very, very long ago you took my small hand 
and slowly and tenderly taught me how to dance
on a meadow covered with yellow and white daisies;
there was no music, but humming birds sang 
the simplest song they ever knew as the gentle wind caressed our sunlit heads
beneath the August sky traversed by torrid clouds that escaped to other seas.



This waltz is for you, mother living in that place of delight, 
oh, smile with the same tenderness and care of heart;
would any other desire be more intense
than being together and happily dance
that waltz without pausing...sweetly losing ourselves in idyllic fantasy 
and explore happiness in unimaginable ways to shun painful reality?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A   Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 5:09 PM
Hi Andrew, love the double impact winning poem... xox~ Linda
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 1:37 AM
Poignant and moving. One that your mother is surely smiling down to see. Congrats, Andrew
A  Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 8:37 PM
awesome win......... love ~SKAT~
Young Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 12:56 AM
Very touching.... loved it! :)
Macfarlane Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 4:54 PM
So beautiful and tender....this write touched my heart! Big congrats! Hugs
Gorelick Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 4:26 PM
This touched my heart..reminded me of dancing with my son at his wedding. The last stanza is heartbreaking. Congrats..BG
Ryerson Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 8:59 AM
A touching, brilliant waltz for your mother Andrew...It's obvious she was very near and dear to you...Love the way you danced at her grave the same way she taught you to dance in that meadow with no music, just the melody of nature...Many congrats - Tim
Mannan Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 10:34 PM
So endearing and lovely. Many warm congrats for this win.
A   Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 5:17 PM
an awesome poem... congrats from PD
A  Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 4:04 PM
:-) Andrew, Congratulations with your dancing poem in Giorgio V's contest. have yourself a nice one ~ SKAT ~
Merryman Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 9:27 PM
A very touching write, Andrew. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
Gorelick Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 12:46 AM
:Lovely...sad..note the typo..its ;;;waltz... keep writing..Bg
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