A Walk With the Birds

Slowly spring sun caresses the land As kowhais will softly provoke Flushes of yellow to gently expand Their buds of the season uncloak Helping bellbirds escape from winter’s last choke. Methodical beats of wood pigeon wings Whoosh thru the quiet spring air. Melodious trills as tuis’s sweetly sing Fantails flitter, with hardly a care While bush robins cheekily dare. Fragrance of earth sweetens the breeze New lambs adventure and race Dragonflies linger, then floating past trees Whio dart up the river with grace My core just idolizes this place. I climb up the mountain out of the trees A kea, the comedian of the highland flies past Does a sharp turn, lands on a boulder to tease It’s green, blue and red feathers contrast Their intelligence and pranks unsurpassed. Day turns to evening; a morepork issues its call A mournful sound that echoes the night I descend in the darkness at the pace of a crawl Then the hoarse cry of a kiwi just out of my sight I'm relaxed. One day with the birds and I’m no longer uptight. For info on these birds www.nzbirds.com

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/24/2015 3:52:00 AM
Mark, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 11/22/2015 10:58:00 PM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning work Mark!
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Date: 11/4/2015 10:48:00 PM
A wonderful Nature poem my friend! Majestic images this poem creates are priceless.. A7
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Mark Woods
Date: 11/5/2015 12:30:00 AM
Cheers Robert, each of these birds are beautiful in their own way, and there are many more than I enjoy as well, but these are my favourites.
Date: 10/26/2015 5:57:00 PM
Well done Mark; I really enjoy reading well written poems about environment sharing and this is a beauty - thanks mate - Lindsay
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Date: 11/5/2015 12:28:00 AM
Lindsay when you are lucky enough to experience these things, as you know, they have an effect. I'm pleased you enjoyed. Thank you sir
Date: 10/24/2015 11:35:00 PM
Seven, seven and a seven - a poetic beauty, Mark, the imagery and creativity is awesome. I love this poem ... CayCay
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Date: 11/5/2015 12:25:00 AM
Eek, I'm a useless bugger. Just realised that I hadn't said thank you. A bit hopeless of me. Thank you my friend.
Date: 10/24/2015 1:08:00 AM
Beautiful. You write with such feeling about what you see in nature and its effect is best captured in the last line. Hi, Mark. Sorry for being remiss, I've been busy lately.
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Date: 10/24/2015 3:20:00 AM
Kim its always lovely to see you pop by, I know the feeling about busy, life at the moment is ridiculously hectic and I haven't been on much either. I love being on here and reading but sometimes real life takes over.
Date: 10/23/2015 3:45:00 PM
:) lovely poem. I must admit...I hardly knew any of those names. I loved the line about My core idolizes this place. You have a close affinity with nature that is obvious in the write. Thanks for visiting my work. :)
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Date: 10/24/2015 3:24:00 AM
I don't miss too many Eileen, as I like your way with words. I'm lucky I spend a lt of time outside so I get the chance to notice things.
Date: 10/23/2015 8:47:00 AM
This is really well expressed, you seem to have a lot of knowledge about birds. This is quite beautiful.
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Date: 10/23/2015 12:56:00 PM
New Zealand never had any land mammals, it was all birds, so we have some stunners in the hills. As a hunter and farmer I've spent a lot of time outside enjoying nature. So where you guys get squirrels etc we have birds.
Date: 10/23/2015 7:31:00 AM
Beautiful write on these beautiful birds you watch and enjoy. Love how you wrote this Mark. One of my favorites. Thank you for sharing my friend.
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Date: 10/23/2015 12:51:00 PM
I'm no bird watcher, I do prefer the long haired variety, but I don't mind observing nature.
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