A Walk With Me

Waves crash the rocks in ecstasy
as I pass the archway 
to the sea.
Onwards to the village, 
busy cafes,
the aroma of coffee brewing,
as a power of teens gather, texting.
 
I venture down 
a chestnut lined road
under a canopy 
of Copper Beech
where bright shafts of sun
illuminate a lane of lavender 
a sea of perfume
wafts the air.
 
Climbing an incline, 
hills in view,
the distant sobbing
of water sounds
a trickling brook emerges
ambling through magenta heather
and thorny gorse.

I reach a stile, 
entrance to the woods
where a carpet 
of frosted red cyclamen 
bleeds down to a deep dark glen.
A chicory lake lies there, frozen
as a mist uncurls between reeds.
  
The granite hills,
 soft with snow,
luminous against a whale grey sky.
A copse of pine trees
surround a curving river
where trout pout, bubbling.
 
At the fold of day, 
returning hom
The pale sun sinks the horizon
as stars tremble
into a velvet night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/9/2011 2:27:00 AM
Thanks for this virtual stroll through beautiful Greystones. I sat on the knoll gazing at the crashing sea. I sat outside the Happy Pear and held the coffee mug to my nose. The lake ,the flowers the river where,' chocolate trout pout'.I did not return home. Instead I ventured down the Chestnut road under a canopy of Copper Beech one more time. Fantastic journey . Soup Mail sent Eamon
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Date: 12/30/2010 9:18:00 AM
Beautiful Imagery Eiken; I love this write! Thank you kindly for your comments on "Pay Attention" and please let me know ehen you post yours. Welcome to PS I'm certain you will find peace here...Lay
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Date: 12/29/2010 9:10:00 PM
Honestly, a couple more of these and I'm just going to stop writing, because I'm wasting my time.
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Date: 12/28/2010 2:10:00 PM
i love this piece i can see all of it so well here my friend thank you
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Date: 12/28/2010 6:46:00 AM
very nice write my friend
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Date: 12/28/2010 4:27:00 AM
Nice tour I have taken with you where you live, enjoyed it, Eiken
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