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A Walk With Me

Waves crash the rocks in ecstasy as I pass the archway to the sea. Onwards to the village, busy cafes, the aroma of coffee brewing, as a power of teens gather, texting. I venture down a chestnut lined road under a canopy of Copper Beech where bright shafts of sun illuminate a lane of lavender a sea of perfume wafts the air. Climbing an incline, hills in view, the distant sobbing of water sounds a trickling brook emerges ambling through magenta heather and thorny gorse. I reach a stile, entrance to the woods where a carpet of frosted red cyclamen bleeds down to a deep dark glen. A chicory lake lies there, frozen as a mist uncurls between reeds. The granite hills, soft with snow, luminous against a whale grey sky. A copse of pine trees surround a curving river where trout pout, bubbling. At the fold of day, returning hom The pale sun sinks the horizon as stars tremble into a velvet night

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Date: 1/9/2011 2:27:00 AM
Thanks for this virtual stroll through beautiful Greystones. I sat on the knoll gazing at the crashing sea. I sat outside the Happy Pear and held the coffee mug to my nose. The lake ,the flowers the river where,' chocolate trout pout'.I did not return home. Instead I ventured down the Chestnut road under a canopy of Copper Beech one more time. Fantastic journey . Soup Mail sent Eamon
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Date: 12/30/2010 9:18:00 AM
Beautiful Imagery Eiken; I love this write! Thank you kindly for your comments on "Pay Attention" and please let me know ehen you post yours. Welcome to PS I'm certain you will find peace here...Lay
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Date: 12/29/2010 9:10:00 PM
Honestly, a couple more of these and I'm just going to stop writing, because I'm wasting my time.
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Date: 12/28/2010 2:10:00 PM
i love this piece i can see all of it so well here my friend thank you
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Date: 12/28/2010 6:46:00 AM
very nice write my friend
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Date: 12/28/2010 4:27:00 AM
Nice tour I have taken with you where you live, enjoyed it, Eiken
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