A Walk To Remember

When I do walk in numerous passage
 And hear the songs of the receding birds;
I behold my beloved’s sweet visage
Where on the lips I see the smile she wears.
So fresh within my mind my darling dear
When back in times beneath the verdant tree
And countless stars which seems for us so near
Embrace our solemn nights in harmony.
But dearly loved our fate is so unfair
To thee it gave the pain you couldn’t bear
And upon your ground I will let my tears
In random fall with all its art unclear.
Yet, in my heart I’ll keep our memories
As an aide memoire of our happiness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/14/2017 12:52:00 PM
Sad but beautiful sonnet you have written. That unbearable pain seems to find its way into far too many tender and loving hearts.. Great poem!!!! A7
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Ruth Wrights
Date: 4/16/2017 8:40:00 AM
oh life could be in that manner sometimes. oh, thank you for dropping a kind comment A7 :). Hope you'll have a great day :)
Date: 3/6/2017 10:00:00 AM
I felt it... Good Job !
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Ruth Wrights
Date: 3/7/2017 10:40:00 PM
it's great you felt it.. thank you for dropping a comment ;)
Date: 2/15/2017 12:09:00 AM
A lovely write Stephany, sad and sweet.
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Date: 2/15/2017 5:40:00 AM
thank you James... :) yes indeed... :(
Date: 2/14/2017 6:52:00 AM
What a beautiful sonnet you wrote here.... Such sadness too, the language you use is so wonderfully fitting. Great write Stephany
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Date: 2/14/2017 7:10:00 AM
I'm so glad you appreciate it :) i just made it after i watch that movie. It really touched my heart :).. thank you Darren :)
Date: 2/8/2017 8:06:00 AM
Beautiful and tender aide memoire ... enjoyed much the write ...
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Date: 2/9/2017 2:35:00 AM
oh thank you for reading sir. I'm glad you enjoyed it.God bless ahead :)
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