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A Walk To Remember

When I do walk in numerous passage And hear the songs of the receding birds; I behold my beloved’s sweet visage Where on the lips I see the smile she wears. So fresh within my mind my darling dear When back in times beneath the verdant tree And countless stars which seems for us so near Embrace our solemn nights in harmony. But dearly loved our fate is so unfair To thee it gave the pain you couldn’t bear And upon your ground I will let my tears In random fall with all its art unclear. Yet, in my heart I’ll keep our memories As an aide memoire of our happiness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/14/2017 12:52:00 PM
Sad but beautiful sonnet you have written. That unbearable pain seems to find its way into far too many tender and loving hearts.. Great poem!!!! A7
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Ruth Wrights
Date: 4/16/2017 8:40:00 AM
oh life could be in that manner sometimes. oh, thank you for dropping a kind comment A7 :). Hope you'll have a great day :)
Date: 3/6/2017 10:00:00 AM
I felt it... Good Job !
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Ruth Wrights
Date: 3/7/2017 10:40:00 PM
it's great you felt it.. thank you for dropping a comment ;)
Date: 2/15/2017 12:09:00 AM
A lovely write Stephany, sad and sweet.
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Ruth Wrights
Date: 2/15/2017 5:40:00 AM
thank you James... :) yes indeed... :(
Date: 2/14/2017 6:52:00 AM
What a beautiful sonnet you wrote here.... Such sadness too, the language you use is so wonderfully fitting. Great write Stephany
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Ruth Wrights
Date: 2/14/2017 7:10:00 AM
I'm so glad you appreciate it :) i just made it after i watch that movie. It really touched my heart :).. thank you Darren :)
Date: 2/8/2017 8:06:00 AM
Beautiful and tender aide memoire ... enjoyed much the write ...
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Ruth Wrights
Date: 2/9/2017 2:35:00 AM
oh thank you for reading sir. I'm glad you enjoyed it.God bless ahead :)

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