Aiyah Torres Poet Blank verse

A Walk To Remember

Watching  busy banquette that morn,
memories flashed  back in my mind.
The day we walked together,
holding each others hand.
We were so happy that moment,
I've seen it with the glaze in your eyes.
A minute I want to hold on forever,
Never allow each seconds to die.
The cold of  wind kissed on my cheeks,
has gone when you whisper goodbye.
The next train is comin',
A walk of love I still remember.

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Austin Eseke January 9, 2014 at 1:39 PM Nice poem indeed,soo saad ending,well hope to see you drop by and comment on my new inspirational poem,thanks and bye for now Austin Eseke January 13, 2014 at 4:40 PM especially my poem on FAITH..Thanks..bye nand huggs Aiyah Torres January 9, 2014 at 2:07 PM thank you for your visit and comment , Austin.. =)) ..i'll check out of your hidden treasures too.. ^__6

Painted Hunter January 9, 2014 at 12:39 PM This poem is beautifully done....Caleb Aiyah Torres January 9, 2014 at 2:07 PM thank you ,Caleb :)) huggs!!! ^__*

Michael Byte January 8, 2014 at 5:59 PM very good poem Aiyah, filled with good memories and tears to end. Someone will come along and turn your frown upside down. Michael Aiyah Torres January 9, 2014 at 9:54 AM thank you for an another warm comment, Mike!!! :))

Peter Dome January 8, 2014 at 5:43 PM Wonderful visual piece,So romantic but sad ending. must have been some day.sending you my best wishes. Pete. Aiyah Torres January 8, 2014 at 5:57 PM thank you for dropping by, Pete :)) best wishes to you, too =^_*