A Walk In the Woods

When life in the city
becomes too much to bear,
With its winding concrete roads,
Its underpasses and overpasses,
Its tall buildings and speeding cars,
When I am overwhelmed by a sense
of hopelessness and unrelenting stress,
I retreat into the arms of Nature

When life amidst people
becomes too much to bear,
With their big black hearts
And puny shriveled souls,
With their depraved moral values-
Self-obsessed, materialistic and profane,
I take refuge in the bosom of the forest.

I find solace in its solitude,
Among towering trees 
and splendorous falls
With its gushing streams 
and magnificent mountains,
The verdant fields and emerald green valleys
with rivers meandering through 
rolling hills and lush plains.
Pretty wildflowers blooming in their colorful attire
peeping coyly through grass and shrubs
swaying alluringly with beckoning smiles
and the sound of bees humming joyfully over them
soothes my insatiable craving for bliss.



~Your Best Old Poem contest by Judy Konos
Contest:"Chasing the Blues Away"
02/02/13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/20/2015 4:36:00 AM
Well deserved win!
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Date: 12/17/2015 8:12:00 PM
congrats Abdul a beautiful write, serenity takes me over when I read this. well deserved win!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/18/2015 9:30:00 AM
Thanks, me too...I am always hiding in the woods!
Date: 12/17/2015 3:33:00 PM
ABDUL, Congrats on your old best poem. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 12/17/2015 1:18:00 PM
Congratulations Abdul on your 1st place win.
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Date: 12/17/2015 11:48:00 AM
what a beautiful poem Abdul many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/15/2013 2:05:00 PM
Ahh, how refreshing to the soul this is, Abdul...congratulations on a well deserved win - Tim
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Date: 2/15/2013 11:03:00 AM
Congratulations on the win. Wonderfully written.
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Date: 2/15/2013 10:41:00 AM
Congrats Abdul! Well done.
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Date: 2/12/2013 11:03:00 AM
Belated congratulations on your win Abdul xx
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Date: 2/11/2013 8:27:00 PM
This is extremely good. Well done!
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Date: 2/11/2013 5:19:00 PM
hey, look, my prediction was right. it is at the top of the winners. Right where it belongs . CONGRATS
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Date: 2/11/2013 3:37:00 PM
That will sure chase away many stresses among the blues .CONGRATS
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Date: 2/11/2013 12:30:00 PM
Abdul congratulation on your big win. Warm, Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/11/2013 9:31:00 AM
Awesome job! Nature is the perfect way to escape the complicated mess known as society :) Congrats!
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Date: 2/11/2013 9:11:00 AM
Hi Abdul, , a nice winning poem... Congratulations with your "Chasing the Blues Away" entry... Have yourself a nice one~ LINDA
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Date: 2/3/2013 7:05:00 PM
I think this one is going to be way at the top of the winners. SUre wish I could write this way for that contest but I will probably do one much more shallow than yours. VERY wonderful poem.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 2/3/2013 8:33:00 PM
Oh, you're just being nice! Like always I appreciate your opinion. Thanks
Date: 2/3/2013 6:48:00 PM
So do I. Very beautiful. Good luck
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Abdul Malik
Date: 2/3/2013 8:34:00 PM
Thanks a bunch of flowers!
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