A Walk In the Woods

When life in the city
becomes too much to bear,
With its winding concrete roads,
Its underpasses and overpasses,
Its tall buildings and speeding cars,
When I am overwhelmed by a sense
of hopelessness and unrelenting stress,
I retreat into the arms of Nature

When life amidst people
becomes too much to bear,
With their big black hearts
And puny shriveled souls,
With their depraved moral values-
Self-obsessed, materialistic and profane,
I take refuge in the bosom of the forest.

I find solace in its solitude,
Among towering trees 
and splendorous falls
With its gushing streams 
and magnificent mountains,
The verdant fields and emerald green valleys
with rivers meandering through 
rolling hills and lush plains.
Pretty wildflowers blooming in their colorful attire
peeping coyly through grass and shrubs
swaying alluringly with beckoning smiles
and the sound of bees humming joyfully over them
soothes my insatiable craving for bliss.



~Your Best Old Poem contest by Judy Konos
Contest:"Chasing the Blues Away"
02/02/13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Selfa Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 4:36 AM
Well deserved win!
Hamilton Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 8:12 PM
congrats Abdul a beautiful write, serenity takes me over when I read this. well deserved win!
Mandani Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 9:30 AM
Thanks, me too...I am always hiding in the woods!
A  Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 3:33 PM
ABDUL, Congrats on your old best poem. HUGS **SKAT**
Tor Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 1:18 PM
Congratulations Abdul on your 1st place win.
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 11:48 AM
what a beautiful poem Abdul many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Ryerson Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 2:05 PM
Ahh, how refreshing to the soul this is, Abdul...congratulations on a well deserved win - Tim
Eastman Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 11:03 AM
Congratulations on the win. Wonderfully written.
Irwin Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 10:41 AM
Congrats Abdul! Well done.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 11:03 AM
Belated congratulations on your win Abdul xx
Lamoureux Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 8:27 PM
This is extremely good. Well done!
Dietrich Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 5:19 PM
hey, look, my prediction was right. it is at the top of the winners. Right where it belongs . CONGRATS
Jones Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 3:37 PM
That will sure chase away many stresses among the blues .CONGRATS
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 12:30 PM
Abdul congratulation on your big win. Warm, Smiles, Connie
Ober Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 9:31 AM
Awesome job! Nature is the perfect way to escape the complicated mess known as society :) Congrats!
A   Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 9:11 AM
Hi Abdul, , a nice winning poem... Congratulations with your "Chasing the Blues Away" entry... Have yourself a nice one~ LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 7:05 PM
I think this one is going to be way at the top of the winners. SUre wish I could write this way for that contest but I will probably do one much more shallow than yours. VERY wonderful poem.
Mandani Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 8:33 PM
Oh, you're just being nice! Like always I appreciate your opinion. Thanks
Jones Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 6:48 PM
So do I. Very beautiful. Good luck
Mandani Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 8:34 PM
Thanks a bunch of flowers!
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