A Walk In the Rhyme Numbs

A Walk With The Rhyme Numb


Smiles and flowers
All gush and out flow of love
So much praise to sweetly drop
In curly Q’s 
With tender precious little tinker bells
Smiles

And so much color to profess
And so much better God’s love to confess

All confession from the heart
The scattered petals
Are sought for delight and respect
Never see the hidden threat
So sugar coated

And where the sturdy strength
Once held a helping hand
The fingers type to bitterness
Demanding in return
For gifts oh so generously littered
Comments
Upon the gentler souls

The one time gentlemen now berates them
Their peaceful poems
Now posted in nervous fear
Of a scathing knife
Still couched in a smile
In curly Q’s
With tender precious little tinker bells
Smiles
Curly Q
Smile

Like a crocodile

Always the girls
The soft and compliant targets 
Always so considerate as they seek to please
To be kind caring sweethearts
They trip on the stinger laid out for them
Unseen in the shadow
Creeping up on them 
The spiteful cruel lambasting accusation comments
All deleted later 
 
The candy floss attack comes rumbling
Lifting its deceitful mask of cloying buttermilk
The critical labors leave them crying
And the noose of a candy rope
Has found its loop around their neck
Pulling tighter in its bullying choke
Dictate to them what to write next
And what they shouldn’t post

The pretty perfect petal plethora of godly smiles
Smiles
Curly Q
Smile
Reveals the nasty little intent to control
And judgmental bullets shot from psalms
Add the weighted ammunition
To bare down heavy upon their tender souls

( Someone should take this child
and over a bended knee
spank the spoiled brat
profusely )

Smiles and flowers
All gush and out flow of love
So much praise to sweetly drop
In curly Q’s 
With tender precious little tinker bells
Smiles

Smiles
Curly Q
Smile

Like a hungry crocodile
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shahwan Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 7:46 AM
Nice.
Winter Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 7:17 AM
Aha. A true gentleman among us. Chivalry is here, alive and well. Defender of many who so appreciate your kindness and efforts of protection. I think this will make someone feel safer, cared for and hugged. Colin, you rock. Love, Shar
Chircop Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 5:31 AM
this is nice and i hope we all write in a good loving way,with respect towards others,and i hope our smiles wont be crocdile smiles,but genuine ones,to make this world a better world,cos what do we take if we use deceitful masks --nothing,its so nice to be ourselves in any situation---this is wonderful- my friend-charma
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