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A Walk With The Rhyme Numb Smiles and flowers All gush and out flow of love So much praise to sweetly drop In curly Q’s With tender precious little tinker bells Smiles And so much color to profess And so much better God’s love to confess All confession from the heart The scattered petals Are sought for delight and respect Never see the hidden threat So sugar coated And where the sturdy strength Once held a helping hand The fingers type to bitterness Demanding in return For gifts oh so generously littered Comments Upon the gentler souls The one time gentlemen now berates them Their peaceful poems Now posted in nervous fear Of a scathing knife Still couched in a smile In curly Q’s With tender precious little tinker bells Smiles Curly Q Smile Like a crocodile Always the girls The soft and compliant targets Always so considerate as they seek to please To be kind caring sweethearts They trip on the stinger laid out for them Unseen in the shadow Creeping up on them The spiteful cruel lambasting accusation comments All deleted later The candy floss attack comes rumbling Lifting its deceitful mask of cloying buttermilk The critical labors leave them crying And the noose of a candy rope Has found its loop around their neck Pulling tighter in its bullying choke Dictate to them what to write next And what they shouldn’t post The pretty perfect petal plethora of godly smiles Smiles Curly Q Smile Reveals the nasty little intent to control And judgmental bullets shot from psalms Add the weighted ammunition To bare down heavy upon their tender souls ( Someone should take this child and over a bended knee spank the spoiled brat profusely ) Smiles and flowers All gush and out flow of love So much praise to sweetly drop In curly Q’s With tender precious little tinker bells Smiles Smiles Curly Q Smile Like a hungry crocodile

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Date: 5/14/2009 7:46:00 AM
Nice.
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Date: 5/14/2009 7:17:00 AM
Aha. A true gentleman among us. Chivalry is here, alive and well. Defender of many who so appreciate your kindness and efforts of protection. I think this will make someone feel safer, cared for and hugged. Colin, you rock. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/14/2009 5:31:00 AM
this is nice and i hope we all write in a good loving way,with respect towards others,and i hope our smiles wont be crocdile smiles,but genuine ones,to make this world a better world,cos what do we take if we use deceitful masks --nothing,its so nice to be ourselves in any situation---this is wonderful- my friend-charma
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