Get Your Premium Membership

A Walk In the Park

As I walk slowly on the soft-hard interlock pathway lost in thought, as the rays of sun drum on my hairless head; the sight of beautiful floral pattern gives a gentle pat on my disturbed mind; which sends lovely vibes through my entire body. The soothing hands of the wind adds to this relief that “tomorrow will be better”, And the mellifluous voices of the birds tap reassuringly. Olusegun Arowolo Date:9-1-2015 CONTEST:"Sense of Touch" sponsored by Nette Onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/20/2015 1:46:00 PM
Hey Olusegun, a hearty congratulations on your win in Carol's contest! Be Blessed, Neva
Login to Reply
Date: 10/20/2015 11:03:00 AM
Olusegun, Wonderful win. **SKAT**
Login to Reply
Date: 10/17/2015 1:09:00 PM
I like the way you weave emotions along with the walk...congratulations Olu
Login to Reply
Date: 9/6/2015 12:54:00 PM
olu... wow, this is a winner for me; i hope you'll join my new contest... congrats from the heart!.. huggs
Login to Reply
Arowolo Avatar
Olusegun Arowolo
Date: 9/7/2015 10:44:00 AM
Thanks Nette,for this encouraging comment....I will try...Have a nice day...
Date: 9/1/2015 10:30:00 PM
Olusegun, I enjoyed reading your poem! Great imagery! Love, KIm
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things