A Walk In the Park

The summer specter like wild parrots squawked,
in piercing jade abandon did it fly.
Through rampant trees of emerald we stalked
the sun's medallion in a cyan sky.


Original Poem: Naive Autumn, posted 10/4/17
Arbitrium Divusa Contest
Sponsor:  Gregory R. Barden

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 7/4/2019 7:33:00 PM
Hello Dale Gregory Cozart, this would be a beautiful walk in the park. have e a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 6/14/2019 12:25:00 PM
Wonderful as a stand alone poem, an obvious choice for top win, your word choices always impress.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/14/2019 12:27:00 PM
Thanks very much, John.
Date: 6/13/2019 5:50:00 PM
This was one of my favorites. Still loving it! Congrats, Dale.
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Date: 6/13/2019 9:47:00 AM
Lovely, Dale. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/12/2019 7:02:00 PM
wow, REALLY GOOD stuff, Dale. I hope it wins big for you! (It's not already judged, is it? Can't seem to keep track)
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Date: 6/8/2019 10:53:00 PM
Superbly unique Dale! The sun enchants with its many hues and you have captured its glory in the autumn season beautifully! This is sure to do well in the contest! : ) xxoo
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Date: 6/6/2019 3:03:00 PM
lovely unique descriptions here
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/14/2019 12:27:00 PM
Thanks, Jack!
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