A Walk In the Park

The summer specter like wild parrots squawked,
in piercing jade abandon did it fly.
Through rampant trees of emerald we stalked
the sun's medallion in a cyan sky.


Original Poem: Naive Autumn, posted 10/4/17
Arbitrium Divusa Contest
Sponsor:  Gregory R. Barden
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 7:33 PM
Hello Dale Gregory Cozart, this would be a beautiful walk in the park. have e a nice evening my friend.
Hamilton Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 12:25 PM
Wonderful as a stand alone poem, an obvious choice for top win, your word choices always impress.
Cozart Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 12:27 PM
Thanks very much, John.
Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 5:50 PM
This was one of my favorites. Still loving it! Congrats, Dale.
Gauthier Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 9:47 AM
Lovely, Dale. Congrats on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 7:02 PM
wow, REALLY GOOD stuff, Dale. I hope it wins big for you! (It's not already judged, is it? Can't seem to keep track)
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 10:53 PM
Superbly unique Dale! The sun enchants with its many hues and you have captured its glory in the autumn season beautifully! This is sure to do well in the contest! : ) xxoo
Horne Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 3:03 PM
lovely unique descriptions here
Cozart Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 12:27 PM
Thanks, Jack!
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