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A Walk

I'm in the warm bed, feeling so perfect, Knowing that tomorrow I can sleep a lot. I'm listening how heavy rain started and is going, Imagining the night cold street people's walk. The drops of rain are as drops of tears, The tears of the people who alone, Who walks at lamppost night and dreaming, How perfectly it used to be before. Their regrets are no more to be heard, And they aren't able to apologies once more. They don't have any chance to be forgiven. So they took freezing wounded walk.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/19/2016 4:34:00 AM

- Welcome to P- Soup with your great first poem, Alexander :) - Here you will find heartily warmth, and meet many great poets - A meeting place for inspiration, growth and pleasure for your words and thoughts - I wish you every success - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/18/2016 8:39:00 PM

Alexander, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Alexander Serdyuk
Date: 1/19/2016 1:48:00 AM

Thank you very much, I'm also very happy that I've joined this community.

Skat A

Date: 1/18/2016 1:38:00 PM

Alexander, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT *

Alexander Serdyuk
Date: 1/18/2016 1:50:00 PM

Hello, dear SKAT! I'm so thankful and grateful to get acquinted with you. I'm so found of writing and hope you do so. I think that we will find a lot in common and our friendship will lead us to unimaginable success.))